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tonya (Chapter 14) - Sun 13 Mar 2016

this story caught my eye and i have to say i love it! very well written


hana sora (Chapter 13) - Sun 13 Mar 2016

I wonder if ryo know about kagome and sesshomaru together.  . Hmm


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Mar 2016

Oh my gosh i'm so happy. . They finally work out this together. .but i think a jealous ryo wouldn't be good.  . Hmm


hana sora (Chapter 11) - Wed 09 Mar 2016

Wonder about how is their journey come. . And please more moment between sessh and kags. .


Ayziajj (Chapter 9) - Tue 01 Mar 2016

i want to cry everytime i read this cause i want to read more lol. Good story!


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 8) - Mon 29 Feb 2016

YESSS This is just too cute! I can't wait tp read more!


SilverInu93 (Chapter 7) - Thu 25 Feb 2016

i hope she  sees her birth parents again to put them in jail


Mona (Chapter 7) - Thu 25 Feb 2016

Awesome!!! Please update again soon.


Saraf Anjum (Chapter 7) - Thu 25 Feb 2016

Aww I thought there'll be more interaction between ClingyKagome and AnnoyedSesshomaru. But it's also good she grew up. Now teenage Kagome show Sessho ur womanly charms lol


Mona (Chapter 5) - Tue 23 Feb 2016

Great update, hope to read more soon.


madz (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Feb 2016

Pless make more I love this story


ryoko (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Feb 2016

good chap

your story coming to gather

update soon please

 


Mona (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Feb 2016

Awesome!!!!  I'm looking forward to reading more.


Ninja_cake (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Hi!

I like your story so far, it's an interesting concept. However, there were a few times that I encountered the wrong tense of a word, such as 'fught' when it should have been 'fought' to keep in with the past tense of the dtory. So I would have a beta check over your story first to fix any mistakes you may have missed.

 

Good luck!


ryoko (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

u have a good story going

update soon please


Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Great!!!  Looking forward to reading more.


Tarajah (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Really interested to see where this story goes


Rosie Posie (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Please keep up with regular updates. I am loving where this story is going. Awesome idea!!!


Lady T (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Like the story idea excited to get the next chapter, so update soon.


ryoko (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

interesting, has promise

how old is kagome now?

if you her remmember when she is 8 or 9 in chap 1

in chap 2, you have act like she is younger then 8 or 9


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