Hello!....Hello...I am still here...waiting "patiently".
Thank you for your response to my last review, I still can't believe that you're new to writing these characters, they've continued to be portrayed so well! I've loved your past couple of chapters as well, especially the confrontation scene between Sess and Kagome.
I really enjoy reading scenes where the spirit and conviction of kagome's character is shown, and how you really have them as equals that aren't afraid to challenge eachother. Also its a bit sexy having Sess so excited by Kagome's definance ;)
I was also very gratified by the kiss scene, very lovely indeed and I'm glad to see that you're not rushing the story after reaching that point and you're continuing to develop their romance at a natural pace! (Though I definitely wouldn't be adverse to any more kisses haha)
I really enjoy this story and I love seeing you update, but I understand life can get hectic, so I hope your everyday everything is going great as well (and not to sound like a creeper, but I did read your bio and omg your little boy sounds so cute!!). Happy new year and have a good one!
Cheers, Hannah
p.s. of course I'm sure you know where you want to go with this story and probably have plans, but if you're after any trope requests, I would defs not be adverse to some sesshoumaru jealously. ;)
Love love love love love love LOVE IT!!!!!
The batter, the wit, the tension... this is brilliant! It's original and well written... I can't wait for more! Keep up the marvelous work!
~Sandreline
Koree (Chapter 10) - Sat 17 Dec 2016
Lol someone likes what they see * wink wink *
Skylar (Chapter 10) - Sun 11 Dec 2016
This story has shocked me with its refreshing quality. It feels so down to earth and relatable, that it has completely drawn me in.
Thank you for this world journey, thus far. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Kagome and Sesshomaru.
Great job!
perfect! I love how this little romance is playing out. Eri is a good asset for Kagome to have in wooing Sesshoumaru. Hehehe, i can't wait for the next instalment.
PLEASE don't give up on this story
u2pias (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Nov 2016
Please update...
modern muzzle grab.... more of this to come??
Koree (Chapter 9) - Wed 09 Nov 2016
Lol how bold of Sessh & right infront of older company xD great chap
Toni (Chapter 9) - Wed 09 Nov 2016
love yor story
I reread this and I'm still in love with it.
Very nice chapter. I liked the first kiss scene. It got me to thinking back to chapter one and my first review; I had mentioned that Kagome would be in her early thirties or close to it by the time Rin becomes a teenager getting close to going into university if she has not already started and I was eluding to the fact that Sessho and Kagome should have entered into a intimate relationship or mated before that time comes. The little nuances of the letter and the chapter makes it seem that they had reached that point. I would ask have they mated before Rin became a teen but that would ruin the story so I will have to wait and see like everyone else. Just a little thought of mine.
Great story and I love it. Lovely writing style. Looking forward to more updates.
Zelda (Chapter 8) - Fri 14 Oct 2016
What an intereating story! I look forward reading more! (^.^)
KairaB (Chapter 8) - Wed 05 Oct 2016
I'd like to see Sesshoumaru agknowledge the fact that he missed Rin's birthday. After you made the page break between Kagome saying good night to him and him being in his room you just dropped the subject of Rin's birthday when you really should have had him think about it and at least feel a little bad and not just forget about the issue, especially since that was the source of the original arguement. Please add something along those lines in the next chapter. Other than that, great chapter. I can't wait to see more. Please, keep up the good work.
I am glad that Kagome had told Sesshomaru how she really feels about Rin and how he is not available for his daughter anymore. I am glad that Sesshomaru had listened to her without ripping off her head. I like your story. Please update soon.
Jennn (Chapter 8) - Mon 03 Oct 2016
I'm not sure why I just found this amazing story now.. But I am so glad I did!! I am loving this!! Great work and great writing. I can't wait to see how Kagome and Sess's relationship progresses. Maybe something physical in the near future...?? (:
Koree (Chapter 8) - Mon 03 Oct 2016
Aww poor Rin :( Sesshomaru has alot of making up to do & it's not just with Rin . Great chap :$
I loved it. LOVE it. I love a Kagome that can stand up to Sesshomaru. I think the only thing missing for me was Sesshomaru's reaction to missing Rin's birthday. Admission that he really did forget, or if he had something planned... but I loved it.
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