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LC Rose (Chapter 6) - Sat 25 Oct 2008
Good response to "too lazy to log on". I thought just what you said. Now on to more important matters!!! This new chapter was great. I was hoping for some Fluffy, but that's b/c I'm a Fluffy stalker. I know, I know. This had to come about for the story to progress. Still, you can't be mad at me for wanting some Fluff. :-) Way to go Kagome when it came to sticking up for herself. Can't wait to see what happens next. Tara

Inulovely383 (Chapter 6) - Sat 25 Oct 2008
I love the update and I agree with you 100 percent...this is fanfiction...it doesn't matter that the characters are OOC...you are merely using the characters in your own story...sometimes the characters will be OOC...sometimes they won't be...you are writing the story for the sess/kag readers enjoyment and your own...I personally enjoy your story and I am looking forward to reading more of what this story has to offer. I am really looking forward to seeing whether or not you let Sess nail Koga to the wall...that would be so much fun. Even if you hadn't made him the abusive boyfriend...the whole 'my woman' deal would be worth reading how Sess beat him senseless. Please update soon.

bre (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
where is the chap?

DazzledShamrock (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
I've only read the first chapter and I'm excited about the story! Maybe it's because I found a story where the author can use grammer? Seriously, You have a very beautiful writing style. I skip stories that have sucky english, so I'm glad you know how to spell!^^ This sounds very interesting. The things that caught my attention as a reader: What is Sesshy's connection to a 21-year0old Rin? What's up with the Kikyou/Kagome? Kagome owns a bar? Sweet. My only negative critique: You made Kagome's bar sound very popular, but I didn't get too much description of the setting. Maybe it'll change for when the club it at it's prime time of the night. So maybe it's just my preferences. But the story is great so far. I'll keep reading to see what happens! Ja ne! ~Shamrock Koishii!

(Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
I'm not sure if you are aware, but Chapter 4 is missing. And you got me all excited about the Domestic Abuse! I wanted to see what was happening! ~Shamrock Koishii~

ebbasain (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
yeah, the chapters not up. only the part with the flash back to the last chapter.

ebbasain (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
yeah, the chapters not up. only the part with the flash back to the last chapter.

Inulovely383 (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
Despite the absence of chapter four...this is turning out to be a really great story...please continue I'm anxious to see what happens next.

addiesmoon (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
just getting better and better

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
wonderful updates though i hate Kouga as her boyfriend, i think you should break that up ASAP!

Zyren (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Oct 2008
nice little intro, im intrigued and hope to see more soon.

Zyren (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Oct 2008
oh yea and very curious about the Kik/Kag lol!

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Oct 2008
nice start! i'd like to see more

addiesmoon (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Oct 2008
love the begining can't wait to see where is goes

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