That was a great chapter loved it... Hopefully they both come to terms but I don't see her bowing to him at every whim. That's too much like a slave if you ask me. Hopefully Sesshomaru wises up and Kagome gain some balls. update soon.
Seems like this spanking is a little bit on the controlling side to me. I wouldn't have him no matter how rich he is. A mate like that is not good, oh and he wouldn't hit her in the face but any where else is still a hit. I think I would leave while the getten is good. Good writing here, can't wait to see where you're taking this!
......idk about this chap. something about it seems a bit icky. I get the dynamic. I get what you are going for, slight miss tho. still like the story, but this was def a mark off.
Kaylah (Chapter 11) - Sun 05 Dec 2021
This is a really good story but I've noticed a lot of grammar errors.
That was a great chapter leave it to Kagome to run and fall off a cliff.... At least she survived the ordeal wonder what will happen when she wakes up and finds Sesshomaru... Oh this was good.... lol
Nice chapter, Happy Birthday To Me!
Great chapter
I like your story, it is interesting.
Skylar (Chapter 11) - Sun 24 Feb 2019
Oh boy. Koga!
Exciting update! Out of the frying pan and into the fire. Just one thing after another. LOL.
Yah! Update!! That was fun!
Nice updat! Thanks so much.
Bad doggie! Bad Sesshomaru! Bad boy! Bad! Lol!!!
Alashia (Chapter 9) - Wed 14 Nov 2018
O wow! The last part this chapter was too funny!
More, please update the next chapter quickly!
Ha Ha . You tell them Kagome.
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