I must say that I am intrigued after reading these first two chapters. The plot line is original and I can only guess at what all could be coming. Obviously there will be some kind of confrontation with mean little Kikyou! Love the little *hint hint* of Kagura's interest in Sesshoumaru.
I find it interesting that you chose to make Inuyasha and his father (and Kouga) human while making Sango a demon. I can totally see little 10 year old Kagome being a sweet and loving child who has pefect acceptance towards all she meets but like most people, seems to accept things for the way they are.
My only semi-complaint is that Sesshoumaru is so OOC. While i can absolutely find it believable that he would vow to protect sweet little Kagome with his life, I just have a hard time imagining Sesshy being... "broken" as you portray him. This is just my opinion and in no way affects the fact that I am going to have to see how this plays out! Hope you update soon!!!
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Wow I love truly love this story. It is refreshing to read a new plot line. U MUST update very very soon.
You caught my attention so far. Added to my list to follow. :-)
This is reading like gold as the color of Sesshy's eyes...Can't wait to read more.
Wow! There are so many stories here, maybe there are others with this kind of setting, but I haven't read any like this.I love it so far! Wonder where you will take them. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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