Too excited about the wedding and mating.
More, More, More.... Great story, can't wait for Inuyasha to get what's coming to him.
Cool sounding gowns, great work Sesshomaru!
Inuyasha is still an idiot, but at least we know why he sold the forest now...
Nice chapter! Very lively! LOL! I love that Kags will be leaning traditional. Wedding kimonos are stunning! Thanks for updating.
LOL Major miss on all three gowns! Good luck ladies!
Nice chapter, I love the plans for the forest!
Interesting chapter. While somewhat titillating, I found the on screen punishment a little disturbing. i wonder who came with Kagura?
Can't wait for more!
Outstanding update! The story is moving along nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Umm..just a bit confused here. Doesn't Kikyo know who Inuyasha is? What did he do, eat lunch with the helmet on? Why doesn't she recognize him at the hotel? Still really hard to follow this with the total lack of punctuation.
InuYasha you REALLY suck... though Kikyo does deserve it I suppose...
Great chapter!
Ree-san (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 May 2017
I'm a little confused. Towards the end there it was like Kikyo didn't know who he was? I'm not really sure what the purpose of that last part was. It's like two different plots were smushed together - started out like he was picking up some random chick then switched to him trying to get back at Kikyo, who was suddenly a virgin again?
Well, geez! That took quite the turn. I'm guessing he is going to cause trouble for Kagome next.
Guess we know how low Inuyasha would go to get Kagome; a doctored marriage license, pictures of Kikyo made to look like Kagome, and dumping Kikyo for good. If he only knew that everyone is on to him. He should just give up, release his claim so that he could become a hanyou once again and move on. But that won't happen, not for a while longer. Can't wait for more.
Oh Inuyasha is such a dick and stupid. Does he really think that what he is doing to Kagome is going to get her to come back to him now? I hope Sessho will not believe anything that is put out there about Kagome and continue on with the ceromony and I hope Inuyasha is founf out soon.
Nice chapter. looking forward to more. Great work!
Lets call that half a good deed? Kikyos outta the way, but Inu falsifying sfuff about Kags is Horrible! I cant wait to see whats next!
It has been a while since I have reviewed but I have been keeping up with the story. I like this last chapter, it was nice and cute. Getting closer to the mating ceremony it seems. The theme park scene sounds interesting and a lot of fun...to bad they don't have a real one here.
Great imagination on the anime theme park scene and great writing job! Looking forward to the next chapters and the ceremony. Does Kagomr have youkai blood in her or did she extend her on life by her experiments?
Keep it coming!
OMG I wish that park existed!
Cool chapter, (:
Well it looks like everything is moving right along for them. Thanks for updating.
Huh, cool... I wonder why?
Interesting news indeed. It seems like our Kagome that is more than the eye.
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