I love the detail. It's like I'm reading a romance novel! Thank you for the update. I cannot wait til the next installment. Especially with the bond created. I wonder if that may make him want to get solely with Kagone.
I read the first two chapters when they came out, and now with Chapter 3 I finally review. I am loving this story! It is so different than other Sess/Kag fics I've read, and I am eager to read chapter 4.
P.S. Somehow, you posted two copies of Chapter 3 in the post. It seems incredibly long, and that's why. Thought you'd like to know so you can edit out the extra copy. :)
I can’t wait to read more!!!! This is so graphic and intense!!!;)
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OMG that was so hot, I needed a cold shower! Very realistic and graphic depictions, with 0 fluff, I loike!!! Interesting concept on the contraceptive sutras and Kagome having that telepathic ability. Wonder with who else will he be paired with? Perhaps a MMF threesome? Keep writing!
Live it want more please
Absolutely l love this! The part when Sesshoumaru said, "feel me". Gave me shivers, it was so good. I cannot wait for more.
I loved it I can't wait to see what you write next your description of everything is very detailed
Wowowow, great writing!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Whoa!!! This is too hot.
Please update soon.
Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Oct 2017
I've read this on another site. I'm just not sure how this story fits on this site as it's a moresome with no true pairings?
I finally got around to reading this after it was recommended to me and I have to say u have some great hobbies I am picking up what you are putting out and if u go pro send me a link. Lol. great first chapter would like to read more.
Jessica (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Sep 2017
Wow! Just wow! I've read some intense erotica before but yours is definitely up there! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!! So curious to see how the story line develops and the background in the girls for being porn stars. Loved Sesshoumaru's reasoning behind being a porn star!!
That first chapter was certainly something, in a good way though of course. Hope you keep it going and update.
What a first chapter! Sesshomaru definitely enjoys his job (as do Kikyou and Rin for that matter!) and I'm not sure why but it puts a smile on my face knowing he actually likes what (or in this case, whom) he does.
Very much looking forward to the next chapter and what our adult star has in store for him :)
This was crazy erotic! But it always had me laughing lol. I'm not sure if I'm insanely immature or what. I wasn't too sure if I was going to like this story from the summary but I'm so glad I read it. It's really great and I'm eagerly waiting the next chapter!
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