NO this can't be the end. I LOVE IT I want more. LOL It can't be that easy for him to get her to agree. please there must be more coming I beg you.
Love this story. LOVE IT. The only thing that i think you should fix is the whale part because a killer whale isn't a whale, it's a dolphin that kills whales. Other then that, this is a good story.
Thank you for writing this!
loved it!
Great ending! Love this chapter.
I can't really fathom that everything is going to be that easy now surely the story continues on. Your leaving it extremely open.
gracy (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Feb 2018
Loved it!!!! Omg!!!!! so great!!!!
thank you so much for the wonderful story!
Mia (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Feb 2018
I demand an MA rated sequel with many chapters!!!
Ok, demand is a little strong...how about I just say please?
Hahahahahahahaha! That was super cute. Kinda wish you would continue it though.
nicole (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Feb 2018
No please continue we was just getting started
Sara (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Feb 2018
Perfection. I love everything you did with this story. Great work!
Cute idea. Mermaids seem to be a popular theme recently, but I don' mind. Not. One. Bit. Lol
Can' wait to see where you take this ????
I like it a lot so far
I can’t wait to read more!!!! I wonder how they‘ll feel when they remember their promise!
nicole (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Feb 2018
Update please do they remember the promise
what an interesting idea. I love it so far. I hope you will continue this.
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