This is a good story, however, if you don't mind me saying it feels kinda unfinished. I was wondering if you planed to expand on what you have already?
Nelda (Chapter 1) - Fri 25 Aug 2017
Definitely more. Please!
Keep posting!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next! Need update!
Lady T (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015
I love the story and concept! So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What halogens next! Need update!
Azumii (Chapter 3) - Wed 11 May 2011
You're not going to leave it there are you?! I love the concept and really enjoyed reading the first few chapters. Please update! xoxox
Update please!!!!
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Feb 2009
GREAT job I loved it keep up the great work and update sooon
Jill Dozer (Chapter 2) - Thu 20 Nov 2008
The first and second chapter are quite well done, I hope that you put up the third chapter soon, or is the story really completed like it says on the status?
(Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Oct 2008
| It says complete on the front part were all the other updated stories are at. I am confused do you plan on leaving it here or to continue? Its a nice start cant wait to see why they left her.
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