Hello,
I love how much Kagome and Takashi have bonded. He is even waking up from sleep, because he feels her distress! How adorable!!!
But it is therefore that I think Kagome is making a mistake by reaching a decision without talking to her son. I do believe he has a right to know and this could damage their relationship...
I was actually surprised that SessMama has personal experience with a shallow mark, though I'm a bit disappointed that she didn't give more information and Kagome isn't asking a few questions of her own...
Let's see how Sesshoumaru and Takashi are going to react to her decision!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
I am so curious about where this is traveling!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens and watch the growth Sesshomaru goes through. Although I do think He could have some very positive growth on Kagome as well. Keep up the great work!
Love the story errors and all????
Love the sorry errors and all????
So happy to see an update! Keep them coming! Now we just need Takeshi to play Cupid.
Can’t wait to read more!!! Thanks for the update ;)
Lorena (Chapter 6) - Wed 20 Jun 2018
I hope I didn't review twice in the same chapter,lol. I always assumed that Sesshomaru and his mother are the only white inu's alive, but maybe there is another? I'm trying to picture if his mother would be stalking in the trees tbh, but I have no thoughts...it felt like a low priority to me because I'm so obsessed over future Kagome×Sesshomaru interactions and the arrival to the castle, but it was obviously important enough for you to add it to the story so now I'm curious
Loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Sun 08 Apr 2018
Quite an interesting tale you got yourself here. I like the life lessons you got Kagome to instill in Takashi, so much so that he stands up to his stronger father with them. There are some grammar mistakes throughout, but you've still got a nice flow to the storytelling. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Emily (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Apr 2018
Great story! I always love a story with Sesshomaru ‘s child bringing Kagome and him together. I enjoyed that he gave her the kimono and talked about the mark. Can’t wait for more!
Mkd94 (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Apr 2018
Great story!! I can’t wait to read what happens next! Keep up the great work :)
I love this story! I've read a couple that has something similar to this but Kagome seems so independent here and i love it! keep up the good work!
Great update. So now things will be a bit different between them. How will Inuyasha explain his leaving his pack and staying gone for so long? Will he be let back into the group or pack? Will things continue to progress with Kagome and sesshomaru? What will his mother do when they get there?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Fun story! Can’t wait to see what happens.
Sessh got told! hopefully this is the start of a better relationship!
Awe loved the mother and son bounding <3 glad Sesshoumaru is being nicer, what will happen when inuyasha comes back?
Nallely (Chapter 5) - Mon 26 Mar 2018
Love this!!! I loveee Takashi ando can't wait forma more, hope you keep going.
I also think that the line story is really good. Nice job.
Lorena (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Mar 2018
!!! I can't believe I'm just reading this! I really love what you've done here, it seems like both Kagome and Sesshomaru are true to character, so it'll be great to see how the story continues~ I also love and appreciate that Takeshi wasn't deprived of his demon instinct while he was with Kagome, it's points that stack in her favor, becaubecause you can't help but wonder what could've been had his mother's plan worked or had Sesshomaru raised him alone
Kyo (Chapter 5) - Sat 17 Mar 2018
Thank you so much for the new update! I adore Takashi so much!
I just wanted to add DONT listen to to so call advice of other "writers" your story is fine in tempo if they can do better tell them to write their own story!! YOURS IS JUST FINE!!
Love this puppy he is opening his father's eyes. Looking forward to next update
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