I love stories of her jumping around in time! She should've slept with both Inuyasha AND Sango imo lol. You're doing amazing I hope
you keep this same energy and keep updating! Pretty please? ????
I just read from start to stop....this story is freaking awesome. I hope you finish this...of course, as time allows. ????
Mecca (Chapter 7) - Fri 03 Jul 2020
I'm wholely invested and in love with this story - PLEASE please update and don't abandon it! It was just getting so good! In love with the way you've portrayed Kagome and Sesshoumaru so much. So curious as to where this story goes. Very glad you've updated, just hope you can keep it going <3
Koree (Chapter 7) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
Wow happy you picked this up again !!
silence (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 Jun 2020
It's nice to see an update for this again. That last conversation was funny, lol.
Love the build up... can't wait for more!
Niomi (Chapter 7) - Sat 27 Jun 2020
Also, her little moment with Inuyasha. WOW. You go girl. I love me a strong, sexy Kagome. No more emotionally and physically weak Kagome. Yes, she has her struggles now but she will overcome them. Its not like she's heartless *eye roll* at some complaints.
Niomi (Chapter 7) - Sat 27 Jun 2020
I LOVE THIS STORY. Im normally wary for post-Naraku adventures but I love this plot of yours. I read all your ANs and I must say I haven't noticed any issues that some expressed? While the characters are more mature, I still love your Kagome. Personally, I don't think it's that different from canon. Everyone grows up, and yes, I do still see the old Kagome! I love how intelligent they both are, her embodying the qualities of a woman, that slight tension, I cannot wait to see more. Even her past and struggles are interesting. Great job
Koree (Chapter 6) - Sat 27 Oct 2018
Woooooooo new fav story alert lol , amazing so far
silence (Chapter 6) - Sun 09 Sep 2018
Ya know, I actually liked your previous portrayal of Kagome in the earlier chapters. There's no need to turn her back into an annoying, whiny little girl. I actually like the foundations of an adult Kagome.
Jamie (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Sep 2018
So the "gremlin" is parasitic in nature? And Sesshomaru is understanding... logically speaking, that wouldn't be too far off, since it's in his best interest not to be a jerk. Still loving these developments! Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Jamie (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Aug 2018
Okay, I am absolutely in love with this concept. Time travelling gremlin popping over a slipstream and getting Kags all tripped up? Also very much enjoying your versions of Sesshomaru and Kagome, so far! They seem like a better fit, this way.
I was at the edge of my seat reading the end of this chapter! Don’t leave me hanging for too long!
Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 Aug 2018
This was an insanely good chapter. Clifchangers are great if you don’t leave us hanging too long ;-)
Now this is fascinating! Excited to see what happens next!
I liked the story when I first started reading. I wasn't sure how exactly it was going to pan out with how different Kagome is (and I love OOC stories, but this seems different from the usual). I hope we get some cool cover art for how Sesshy looks with his hair tied up <3.
This latest chapter has pulled me back in, and I love the way that you wrote it. It definitely gives a little more insight on Kagome and Sess. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Lammy (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Aug 2018
I am enjoying your story! Can't wait for the future chapters
Such an amazing update! I was so surprised by their time travel to 1945. I honestly thought they would stay feudal or go to her future. Are we going to get resolution about the entity she sees in the feudal era? I can’t wait for another update!!!
Inuyaoi (Chapter 4) - Wed 01 Aug 2018
Well I didn't see that coming. It's funny because I can imagine the world falling apart and sesshomaru taking it stride. Nevermind the impending bombs, are you wearing pants? Lol
Oh and Heres the thing about Kagome from what I've noticed after re-watching the entire series this year--she is literally as nice, sweet and caring as she is mean and petty. Like some of the stuff she does to inuyasha, of course the sits, the scolding, hurting his feelings-she has done it without apologizing. Kagome is kind of all over the place. I think the episode that really sticks out is the one where inuyasha breaks the hand me down bike her mother gave her to eplace the old one. Both sota and inuyasha had the fear of God in them and sota didn't even do anything.
So Idk. I can't say I'd be all that sweet and forgiving if someone "touched" me while I was in treatment either. I'd imagine I'd be a bit jaded.
I am playing catch up with this story and I have enjoed reading it. It is well written.
I like your development of both Kagome and Sesshomaru's characters.
I think that thing that keeps blinking in and out of Kagome's sight might be messing with their time traveling from place to place but question would be why?
Between June to August 1945 about 10 major cities were fire bombed and Osaka and Tokyo were a couple of those cities hit and later Hiroshima and Nagasaki were hit with the devastating A-bomb. Millions of people died from the radioactive poisoning. So I think Osaka where S/K were was in June 12, 1945 being fire bombed by conventional weapons. I believe. I'm sure I got this wrong.
Wonderful story...looking forward to more chapter update.
Excellent job!!!
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