Wow, I loved that chapter...  So when do we find out what that creature was?  I'm glad someone wrote about the second world war even if it was a small bit.  This is the second story that had a reference to 1941 to 45.  I can't wait to read more.

Update soon

To tell you the truth  I feel conflicted. First of all I do love your writing and your portrayal of a traumated female. Second I fail to recognise Kagome in your character since she is so different from the Canon Kagome  Don't get me wrong it's brilliant and the fact that you took the challenge to go this way is worth of praise. It's just we are so used to that sweet forgiving Kagome that I literally can't imagine what exactly happened to make her this way. Since I don't know if this is Canon or you added some happenings at the battle with naraku or something else I really keep thinking what horror happened. And her males in rotation ... This literally is blowing my mind.  Its really make me feel uncomfortable  Ignoring the fact about the belief that a miko needs to be a maiden to have her power  which I never believed, her soul is not at peace to have the control and power you suggest  she has. A conflicted Kagome controling the air and such....

I really mean No disrespect I am just stating my opinion  I am intimately known with stress depression and anxiety  I am myself a victim of them so I will never make fun of it. Its just we are so used to a certain type of Kagome that it's hard to look from a different angle. When it's a new character please  but when you borrow one that has his character already created its harder to rewrite and rebuild her from anew. So good luck with that and bravo for taking this challenge. Miss little sunshine is becoming a Tragic character. We, me actually see Kagome as strong and beautiful and such a heartfelt person, so I look forward to seeing your version of Kagome. Please do not take it as negative  I just state my opinion. Just hope she won't accost Sesshomaru the way she did inuyasha lol. Its just I hope for a beautiful relationship between them not based on sex but on trust and understanding  But like I said its strictly my opinion  you can easily ignore it. Take care of yourself and good luck with your fic  

Like how you set up falling into the well. Does that creature have something to do with the new activity? Fat Boy and the end of world war II! Did not see that coming at all!! I think Sesshomaru is handling time travel well all things considered. Even though he had just a hint of a minor little freak out! Never seen a Kagome like this. No tears and merciful deaths. Are there any cracks in that protective wall she has built around herself? Big plans! I like it! Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next!

interesting take on the story I like the story line  looking forward to more chapters 

All I can say is wow! And I love that there will be no demon references in this story. Supernatatural or mythical being has a much better sound to it than demon. I like it. Got to researching after reading this chapter and there are several conflicting storylines between the anime and the manga and misenterpretations in general with the English dubbing. I am guilty of falling into the trap of calling them demons because I became a fan from the anime. And also referring to Sesshomaru as Lord of the West from so many fanfics depicting him as such.A lot of great stories but there is actually no reference of him being any kind of ruler. Well..... at least not in the anime!!! Heh heh! I think you have this under control! Awesome chapter! Kagome isn't gonna be so grabby with Sesshomaru, right??LMAO! Hope not!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Really enjoying this! Thank you!

Holy shoot that update was AMAZING! Everything I wanted! I was so sad when it ended lol! Your writing is amazing and I’m excited to see what you have planned next!

Oh, this is good. Reaaaal good. Gritty and dark, just how I like it. This jaded, pain loving Kagome is just delicious, her and her men on rotation. Leaving inuyasha dumbfounded, not to mention high and dry...uh...stiff? Cold blooded, doing it just because she could. Gah! I can't for her to really interact with Sesshomaru and to find out how he'll process her clearly grown up ways. 

I'll normally dont read stories with few chapters but bbbbaaaabbbyy listen I love this...your style of writing is beautiful...keep it up.

ImI super excited for this.  This is the second or third story I've seen lately that takes a darker turn at the fandom.  ItsI important to write reality into fiction, otherwise it falls flat, so bringing the grit and pain into the story lends it some authenticity.

Woo!

Awh poor Kags is going to have a hard time in the past with facing things :(

Some same, some differences. I'm more familiar with the anime than the manga. More time has lapsed and much more raw emotion shown here than the tv series. You say little but your characters and story jump right out of the pages! I love that! I've yet to become an author on dokuga, but I am an avid reader. I don't see your style that much an only a few others have caught my interest as you have. Very nicely done! Would it put you on the spot if I predict Sesshomaru will be damn spectacular? I have faith in you!! LOL!! I'm ready for more. Bring on chapter three and the Lord of the West!!

Wow! Really can't wait for another chapter! The story line flows very nicely into an awesome cliffy. Fantastic start! And OMG! Can't wait to see how you portray Sesshomaru! Not a typical good bad guy!!! Story is already to dark to settle into that pitfall! Hope you will be dillegent with your posts. I think this is going to be a great story!!

I must say, very nice sequencing between scenes. Oh and for now at least, I really enjoy how the story is progressing especially Kagome confronting her fears with the help of a support system of Ania and her mom. 

Interesting and captivating beginning to what seems like will be an intriguing story.  :)

There were a couple or so grammatical errors but otherwise a very well put together chapter.

Kagome, while struggling and coping with PTSD, chooses to get a medical PhD to become a doctor in Clinical Psychology specializing in Neuropsychology was an awesome undertaking.  :o

You left us with an intriguing cliffhanger and I am looking forward to the next, hopefully quickly posted, chapter that will explain Kagome's sudden disappearance at the well right in sight of her mother no less. :o

Excellent job!!!  :)

Amazing beginning! I can’t wait to find out more of her story. What happened to her 5 years ago? what about the destruction of the jewel? How does Sessh play into all this? Can’t wait for more!!!