Ooh, The last line makes this. I almost wish you would continue this, but then it would lose the impact. I adore it, cant wait to read the rest of your work

Oh that's cold or a proposition lik not sure which 

The last words he leaves to kagome tho....hits me hard.

Ewww....  lmfao. That imp was always a disgusting little freak, anyway! But that last line... a possible challenge? 

I need some eye bleach to erase the image of that little toe doing the freaky with Kagome

That was the greatest fanfiction I ever read.  Bring back to the Dokuga awards just so Walter can win pleathe.

This story was great!