Congrats on finishing your fic! I loved how it came full circle! The reference to the game was a great idea, it seems that Inuyasha is not that useless after all! XD
It's not easy to include battling scenes in drabbles but I think that you are doing good! :)
That wandering hand! LOL Miroku is never going to change. I love how you are able to spin those little moments of humour into you story!
Wow, is Kikyou actually telling the truth? I'm not sure yet.
Now that the jewel is complete I'm wondering what will happen next? Looking forward to your next update!
VS (Chapter 24) - Tue 10 Sep 2019
Inuyasha, you unruly dog! You destroyed the moment! And they had finally some alone time! TT
Kagome is starting to feel more comfortable. It was super sweet when she reached out to hold his hand! <3 And Sesshoumaru is very patient with her, I love that he isn't rushing her. And he can actually read her very well. He understood that she needed a walk and some alone time just by seeing her moving around in camp.
I would go for the cresent moon too. XD
VS (Chapter 22) - Tue 10 Sep 2019
You were able to portray Sango very canon like and I think that's great! She was very close minded where youkai where concerned and you were able to transfer that hate in your stories against vampires.
Miroku too seems very canon like. He is open minded and gives people an actual chance. He is really listening to what they say and judges afterwards.
Kikyou as a vampire! LOL It's kind of fitting...the walking dead!!! XD
Every word that left her mouth just scream "lies" to me. Let's see if I'm right.
The story is getting really interesting now, especially with the reference to the game!
VS (Chapter 19) - Tue 10 Sep 2019
Hey! I just love how you describe the sexual tension between Kagome and Sesshoumaru! They will have to talk openly soon or both of them will explode. XD Can't wait for that conversation!
Shippou is super sweet in this chapter! I really liked how he tried to describe in his own childish way what he smelled. And I was surprised how comfortable he felt with Sesshoumaru around him. Did Kagome even notice? XD
Let's see if Inuyasha is going to throw a tantrum when he smells/feels the tension between those too! LOL
VS (Chapter 18) - Sun 17 Mar 2019
Whaahaha, what a funny chapter!!! So Sesshoumaru is peacocking??!! XD I would love to see that dance myself! ;) And Kagome's grandpa is the best! :)
Though my favourite part was when Sesshoumaru looked up to heaven... :') Kagome can be rather slow, haha. At least he got it out of his system. Let's see what Kagome is going to say!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
VS (Chapter 14) - Sun 17 Feb 2019
Okay. What the hell just happened?! You mean to say that one who has been in the feudal era too, developed a video game based on the Inutachi adventures??? I LOVE it! :D
And the comment about "Inuyasha's dream self" was just funny! I can imagine Sesshoumaru's bored and slightly digusted expression. :P
I'm looking forward to your next update!
VS (Chapter 13) - Sun 10 Feb 2019
Okay? Wtf Sesshoumaru! "You smell better than the air here"...well, considering that the air stinks this is not really a compliment. More of an insult and Kagome even has a bodily reaction to that insult! :'D :'D :'D
His reaction at the end though was sweet! And I can just picture him sniffing the air "audibly", like an adorable puppy! :P
I wonder whom that youki belonged to.
Looking forward to your next update!
Krista (Chapter 13) - Sun 10 Feb 2019
Ha! Who could it be, this mysterious youkai he did feel..? Aha kind of sang that to the Zaboomafoo song, my bad. Anyway, awesome chapter, and I can't wait to read more. I hope your Muse treats you well.
Krista (Chapter 13) - Sun 10 Feb 2019
Ha! Who could it be, this mysterious youkai he did feel..? Aha kind of sang that to the Zaboomafoo song, my bad. Anyway, awesome chapter, and I can't wait to read more. I hope your Muse treats you well.
VS (Chapter 12) - Sun 03 Feb 2019
Hello,
I was hesitant to read this fic because of the vampire reference. Though I'm glad I did. You have created something really interesting here. I especially like all the funny elements you have worked into the story. Poor Sesshoumaru, trying to court Kagome is hard. Let's see if he will get time alone with her or if someone/something is going to destroy his plans again! ;)
You did a good job so far and I'm looking forward to your next update!
Sarah (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Nov 2018
I really am enjoying this. I can't wait for the next update!
Poor Inuyasha lol! I always got a kick out of watching him sit on his haunches and scratch behind his ear with his back leg just like a dog, and then wondering why everyone in the group stared at him. I also remember Inuyasha actually getting down on all fours in the middle of the road to sniff out a scent, then get angry when his friends started sniggering at him......well anyway I cannot wait for the update here. Winner gets a big prize if they can guess correctly exactly why Inuyasha smells like the dead, hmmm??? All I can say is “Things that make you go yuck!”
Great chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!
Love to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter
This story sounds interesting, please update the next chapter quickly!
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