Fantastic chapter! !
Love this !?!?! Awesome plot going on so far. Can't wait for more!?!?
Hello,
I really like the pace of this story! So gathering Sesshoumaru's yoki will be part of the plot? Nice idea! I'm glad you haven't let him find all the balls yet. An interesting time is sure to come with Kagome and Sesshoumaru travelling alone! Let's see who is going to annoy the other first! XD
I like your characterisation of Kagome. She's a lovely, polite and humorous young women yet she has earned her place as Lady with her tactical mind and stubbornness!
Nuriel is as always an amazing OC. I'm glad you made use of him again! And I kind of feel sorry for Inuyasha...handing these three elders is sure a hard task! :P
I'm looking forward to your next update!
not sure if you realize it or not but the chapter is written twice.
That said, I am liking the role reversal. Its interesting and having Sessh being the rude, undignified one is funny.
Interesting plot. LOTS of typos. And chapter 5 is doubled. I'll be looking for more.
Amazing concept!!!! Update soon!!!
Good Chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Awhh, I'm melting here! I just love they way you portray the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Rin!!! And I'm happy to hear that Rin still has some family...although that means that she has a place to stay...but maybe she likes him so much that she is going to follow him secretly? ;)
Swoons*love this so much. I cannot wait for more. Thanks for the update.
Unlike seas going to the past from the future but why strip his power s¿
Love the concept and can't wait to see what happenes next.
I'm adding this story right now. This is so good. Thanks for adding it to the site. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
I'm soo looking forward to this story! It is quite an interesting concept and I'm curious to see how much of the canon you are going to work into this story. I was a bit "disappointed" that Sesshoumaru is a demon. But you did take his powers. :) Did I get it right, that every energy ball that left his body, has some particular powers of Sesshoumaru? Like the one Sesshoumaru found is only his appearance, and the one Lord Kage found is only the acid?
Interesting twist! Can’t wait to see what happens
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