I am not fully understanding. Inuyasha stayed alive for three days going frrom hanyou to his human night. Would he have survived if he had remained youkai? Could they have even survived a rescue had they known that he still lived? Did Sesshoumaru suspect that he might have survived after Ah-Un did?
And the angst keeps on coming, but I love it! Kagome really needed this moment to say goodbye to Inuyasha. I would like to see Sess go through the same thing even if they weren't as close. I love Chiyo's words of wisdom to Sess, he really needed to hear that. I believe Kagome will always love Inuyasha, but that doesn't mean she can't have room in her heart to love someone else. It is very common to fall in love more than once. Inuyasha did it, and so could she.
Wow...these 10 chapters brought me to a place that I can't even describe....phenomenal job.i am a true fan. Thank you for creating this amazing story. I look forward to more of your work.
Orotami (Chapter 197) - Sun 07 Jul 2019
I'm crying right now. So thank you for shedding those tears. What a heart wrenching set of drabbles that ended on a few good chuckles and grins. She truly needed this. And I think now she can finally fully open her heart to Sesshoumaru. He's in for a suprise. Kagome loves hard. As always, you keep setting the bar for this drabble story higher and higher. Are we still pantsying? Because it's still working. Its the magical pantsying drabble.
genie48 (Chapter 197) - Sun 07 Jul 2019
Real and beautifully written.
Orotami (Chapter 187) - Sun 07 Jul 2019
So happy to see this update and man you knock this set out quickly! You're amazing and very talented. I can't wait to see what you do with the next set of drabbles. I'm hanging off the cliff right now with no support devices!
The grief is real! Poor Kagome! I think I’m one of those readers who hasn’t caught on yet - why did Tenseiga only heal the human half? Maybe I’m missing something. Anyway! These two are in for another ride on the Grief Train. But I did love the scene where Sess joined Kagome with all the pups and A-Un. And the fight - he really effed up when he cut her hair. I like how you handled that, as a storyteller. Where Sess says “I like it”, but Kagome stands firm demanding he apologize. She doesn’t get flustered. She doesn’t ignore her upset or let a man’s/her mate’s compliments distract her from what she’s feeling. Very good!
Also! Please don’t delete this story! You’ve done an amazing job! It’s beautifully written. And even if some chapters aren’t perfect - no worries, they are! - you can always fix them later. You’ve made amazing progress in their characterization and relationship with just 100 words each. I know I look forward to your updates. So if you have it in you to continue, please do! It’s a beautiful story!
genie48 (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Jul 2019
I'm one of those readers who checks several times a day to see if you've had a chance to update. While this is your story to tell, I haven't read anything I thought should be changed. I'm impressed with what you've done so far. It's difficult to tell a story well in drabbles and you're doing it very well. For me as a reader the most important thing you can do is touch me in some way and you always do. I think you do that for most, if not all, of your readers and that's one of the highest compliments I can pay you. I'm with your reviewer who said some of us would be heart broken if you took the story down and rewrote it. I love it just the way it is.
This is amazing!!! I can't wait for you to post again!
Faith (Chapter 181) - Sat 06 Jul 2019
NO! Don't delete anything. If you get really stuck and need to back track a bit to get the plot and character development where you need it to be, just...I don't know...upload alternate chapters and keep going from there. I know it's got to be super challenging to write a serial and get the pacing right, but your readers have definitely gotten attached to what you've written so far and would really miss it if you take them down. Try to push on and finish the story first before you do any major corrections...pleeeeaaaase!
Orotami (Chapter 181) - Sat 06 Jul 2019
Please dont delete this! Its a beautiful piece and I think many of us would have our hearts shatter with any small drabble suddenly not there. Writing is never easy. It's also so intimate. Your sharing a piece of you with all of us with every upload. But, writing is also about life. Through all the good and bad we can preserve and over come. Writers block is just a hurdle. Not feeling the passion is just a hurdle. So throw your heart into these terribly disturbing scenes coming up. Make it one of your biggest mountains you conquer and destroy. As always, take a few days to process your thoughts. Daily updates are amazing, but we also understand a writer sometimes needs to re-find themselves within a work and where it's heading. Just remember your pantsying gut party drabble has been spectacular! Kudos!
Don’t you dare!!! I’m one of those readers that just read and do not review , but you’d be doing yourself and your readers a disservice if you just started all over. I love where this story is going and I am extremely invested. You are one of the few writers to post consistentl. Please keep up the phenomenal work ????
Nilee1 (Chapter 181) - Fri 05 Jul 2019
Please keep going. You are an excellent writer who has mastered the difficult task of creating verisimilitude in a mythic world. You have brought me both smiles and tears. I have never seen Sesshomaru or Kagome so dynamically presented. As a result, I have become a little jaded; and it’s very difficult to read other Sesshomaru/Kagome stories without measuring them against your writing.
My guilty pleasure is knowing that you’ve posted during the day but saving them
to read at the end of my day- better than ice cream and less fattening ;-)
The scene with Ah-Un was heart warming. Sesshoumaru still has much to learn.
i love the plot story so far. . we need more :)
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