i created this profile just to review. I really enjoyed this story. I snickered at the chapter 492’s a/n “*whistles and walks off*”. Nice set up to the final chapter. Lots of emotions punched into short chapters. Interested in seeing where you take the story in the future.... or past?
An absolutely wonderful and enjoyable read.
I look forward to reading the sequel and the other stories you have planned.
I was a little confused about the chapter where Sesshomaru finds Akio, the fox kit, and he says he knows her scent...but going back to the scene in the future during the panthers attack on the shrine, then it dawned on me. Akio was his future adopted daughter he met during the fight so that is where he knows her scent from.
And I first thought in this epiloge that Sesshomaru was talking to Inuyasha but it was Naoki that he was talking to...right?
I loved the little back and forth time jump snipettes involving the children. I hope in the sequel you will expand and give us more insight on the adopted children and how they all became part of an amazing family.
I hope you are feeling better and healing well at this point in time. Take care of yourself.
Cheers to you for a story well written!!!
Wow really loved this story, though the ending was a little off putting who is sesshomaru talking to cause with the feh it sounds like yasha but I thought he was dead?
Beautifully written! I had moments of snorting laughter to hysterical sobbing. My husband even commented why I don’t normally do that with fanfiction. Thank you so much for this. I’m definitely going to go back and reread It again and again! ???? I cannot wait for the sequel!
Nilee1 (Chapter 742) - Sun 25 Aug 2019
I have never enjoyed a story more than this one. I feel wholly inadequate to leave a review that says how wonderful you writing truly is. I laughed cried, was amazed, pensive...If you can create that gamut through Dabble...
I be re-reading “E pluribus unum” a little bit each day because I cannot imagine a day without your updates :-)
Throw us a bone now and then :-)
Btw... did you resurrect Inuyasha?????
Natalia (Chapter 742) - Sun 25 Aug 2019
I waited for this to be finished so I could review! It's because it's too amazing so I had to push my impatience down and wait. Reading chapters and have cliff hangers.... Nothing like a good old happy ending to soothe my soul!
You did an amazing job! I congratulate you on an amazingly written fic! Especially while being physically in pain. The emotions were real and ERM how should I say? It's life, and life is not perfect. I appreciate the touch of realism and the humanity you showed in this. I loved everything, even a Sesshoumaru that was not perfect!
Will eagerly wait for more work from you! Meanwhile I hope you feel better and heal! Take care of yourself!
Thx again for sharing this!
thalatte (Chapter 742) - Sun 25 Aug 2019
I've been following this story for a while now and I loved it!! I usually don't like tragedies but I loved how this story mirrored life and the way it is made of sorrows, new beginnings and joyful little moments. I especially loved the moments when they "connected", it was such a tender and meaningful gesture, and actually, that's the reason I like this story so much. It reads as a meaningful, tender and deep journey with wonderful imperfect characters, as it should be. Thank you for giving us this work of art despite of your hardships and cheering me up a little every time I got an update notification. About the sequel and the whole going to be rough thing, should I be afraid? Well, even then surely I won't be able to not read it. Thank you again and kudos for a great work!
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