Didn't notice it's your weakness until you pointed it out. I felt like it flowed well with the story and your quality of writing. I was able to imagine the scene as I read, so I think you did a fine job! Will definitely let you know if otherwise in the future. So, this story is so underrated! You deserve so much love! Your style and quality of writing, the minuscule details and feelings you include, amazing! Just like the others, the slow burn between them is killing me but I loveee how you keep Sess true to character! Not only that; but this is exactly how I picture him to react if he was human. Can't wait for more! I know it'll be worth it. Also, you made me anxious with the whole Sango gushing thing. I definitely don't need that stress!
Nicole (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Feb 2020
I both love and hate the slow build that is Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship. I just want more steamy scenes, but at the same time I love that you aren't just throwing the characters together. I have gone back and forth about which of your current works is my favorite and I think I have finally settled on this one. I check every single day for updates and am always so excited when I see a new chapter!
Also, I really hope Sessho shuts down Sango because, excuse me hunny but he is TAKEN! lololol. I've got Kagome's back ;)
hw (Chapter 7) - Tue 04 Feb 2020
Aw, I feel bad for Sango. Dealing with a cheater is no fun, but I'm not sure Sesshoumaru will be interested in being her "tool". Well, maybe if he knows how much it'll upset Kagome, he'd do it out of spite? Idk.
It's great to see InuYasha stepping well into his role as a leader and how well it suits him! At this point in the story, I really don't see how Kags and Sessh will end up together, especially if Inu returns Kags' affections. Will there become a love triangle?
And they need to hurry and find Rin!
Can't wait for more chapters!
Mecca (Chapter 7) - Tue 04 Feb 2020
*gapes* Sango! You bitch! Hands off the arrogant, pompous, unbelievably hot human Sesshy! I am loving the banter between Kags and Sesh right now. I hope it's leading up to some hot, intense angry sex or is it just me...? *fans self* Ah but Good Boy Inuyasha can make for a jealous Seshy if things keep up with him impressing Kagome... Dis gonna be gewd.
witty (Chapter 7) - Sun 02 Feb 2020
I'm intrigued. It's rare to read a fic where Sango isn't solely focused on Miroku. I kinda like it. Poor Kagome lol now she's on Sesshomaru's radar...how unfortunate:P
Lauren (Chapter 7) - Sun 02 Feb 2020
Well that was unexpected. Miroku is still being a philanderer after Naraku's defeat? He supposedly stopped months before Naraku was killed. I'm assuming they weren't even engaged in your story? Sango may have designs on Sesshomaru, but beyond Kagome's jealousy, he's still Sesshomaru and he can't stand humans. Though, maybe he will mess around with Sango to annoy Kagome and Inuyasha. Hmm...
Well....that took a left turn lol. I like seeing more of how the group is interacting with their newest member and even Inuyasha's response. I'll also admit that I'm happy Kagome had a very different reaction to Sessh than Sango. How interesting that little turn. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
hw (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jan 2020
Loving this story and this chapter was so so good. It was great to see the brothers come to an understanding of sorts. And you had me dying at the end with Kagome and her mom! LOL! Poor girl.
Esnix (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Jan 2020
hahahahaha omg that last part had me in stitches!! Poor Mahone. Look forward to seeing her revenge against Sesh!
LMFAO! Oh Mama Higurashi!
witty (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020
I liked that tidbit with Sesshomaru explaining his and Rin's relationship. Any inking of sessxrin in a story repulses me. Kagome's mom LOLOLOL!
Nice chapter:)
I'm dead right now lol Her mother was so aggravating. Like come on mama Higurashi! If Kagome was getting it againat a tree 500 years in the past, you would be none the wiser Lol But I am interested to see how this new gift plays into things later on. Also, I like seeing the brother's talking. Even if there's taunting, I feel like they learned something about the other. Going to be very interesting if Sesshomaru is around long enough for Inuyasha to experience a new moon.
p.s- the lemon kind of made me uncomfortable. I personally couldn't understand why so early in the story she would have been so physically turned on to have allowed that vs, possibly taking care of it herself privately like he did. Especially considering their previous history with each other. I actually thought the lemon was a dream she had while on him and would wake up from, and that made sense, until I realized it wasn't.
Lauren (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020
Funny scenes all around. But poor Inuyasha. So insecure about Sesshomaru.
Lauren (Chapter 5) - Fri 17 Jan 2020
Very rude. Jerk Sess is in caracter, so it fits. Cannot wait until your next installment
You will, I hope change him back at some point, right?
Kags (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Jan 2020
Kudos! Thank you for the update!! The chapter didn’t disappoint! And I think you’ve written Sesshomaru rather well!! I like his jerk personality! He had his whole world come down. So of course he’d be a bigger jerk thank before! Thanks again!
Ya know, even though he definitely was a jerk, I appreciate that Kagome could hold her on. I would have felt much worse if she crumbled from it but the points you used (Inuyasha losing that demoness and then Rin) to redirect her back to what mattered/strengthened her spine was appreciated. I can understand why he needs to be this way right now though, because homeboy has a whole spiritual awakening he's about to go on as a human. He has a lot of misconceptions that literally only walking in someone else's shoes could illuminate.
Also, shout out to Kagome for knowing he wanted off lol!!!
I'm definitely hooked! Can't wait to see where this goes :D
Nilee1 (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Dec 2019
OMG! They have to go find Rin. Like it or not they need Inuyasha and Kog-- Pride be damned.
Shorter than usual but still very much appreciated! Thank you for the update and Happy Holidays!
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