Reviews for Voicemails by SHORTFRY

Cynthia Sheffield (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Oct 2021

T_T and here I thought their encounter was going to be wonderful... part of me always suspected something like that was going to happen, I just didn't want to be right.

Amazing one shot!!! Now if you excuse me, I got something in my eye T_T


IndiaNovember (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Jul 2021

Why does this hurt so much? Halfway through, I felt it. Ugh. My heart. <\3


IndiaNovember (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2020

Ouch. It hurts. I'm re-reading it after the reaching ending. Ugh. Why?  ????


Onyinye Monyei (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Jun 2020

What happened. 


Jade (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 May 2020

My heart hurts. I figured it out about halfway through, but I needed to finish it. 


Drosselmeyer (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 May 2020

The pain and grief in this are so tangible. My heart was literally in my throat from the beginning. First voicemail? It plummeted and I thought, "Oh gaw- she's dead and he's grieving." Killed me. Very well done. And I found it inordinately precious and unique that she called him "Buttercup." It's not something I would imagine working, but it totally did. Great job! 


typicalyssa (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 May 2020

I love this so much! Bittersweet but perfect. Please keep writing!


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

Beautifully written, nice tasteful lemon, angsty AF ending!!! Yikes! Almost made me snivel at work, darn it. The descriptions, the voicemails, the texts, all flowed right along until the LP did a major SCREECH at the end. Diabolical, but very nicely done. I had no clue that was your first smut, though, you really did do well!

:D

~~Wiccan~~


Jess (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

T___T someone's cutting onions right over my screen *insert every crying emoji here*

Beautifully heartbreaking, even though I had an inkling that the Kagome interactions were all in flashbacks. Still didn't stop me from getting ALL THE FEELS in the end though T_T

Moot point, but how did she die though? I'm assuming plane crash? Or maybe she never made it to the airport?

Anyway, I enjoyed this one shot! I am a fan of your writing. I hope you continue your other works too! Thank you for sharing. 


Mecca (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

Oh geez, I get it now. Plane crash, bad storm or something to that effect. Fantastic lemon by the way! I was excited ;) But then my HEART was BROKEN right afterward! haha thanks for that! yet again!


Mecca (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

I f'n KNEW it! I had the feeling that he wasn't just listening to these voicemails just to listen - well maybe he was - but it had that sad note to it that told of the fact that the sender had passed. What killed her?? Oh god how heartwrenching! Poor Sess! What's he gonna do with himself now? TEARS. ugh. This was beautiful though, in all its sadness. Thank you for sharing and making me cry today! Not that I needed it but it was good nevertheless! 


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

Also, fantastic lemon! Yes, lemon. We go way back in this community ;) Wouldn't know it was your first until you mentioned it. Looking forward to more. Happier, sexy, lemon please!


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

Oh man, I read it again! The waterworks, I tell you. You got the nuisances down just right, it's like a little movie in my mind. 


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! :( What a beautifully written piece. How terribly sad.. how long does it take to go from bursting into tears with every voicemail, to a sense of peace and love? I don't think I could handle it. Maybe I'm just being emotional. You did a wonderful job. I've always hated Kagome's mortality. Thankfully most stories spoil us and enable our fantasy of her living forever with Sess. I guess her morality is what makes their love so much more precious. Thanks for continuing to update! Appreciate ya


susie (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

i really liked this.   it was hot, and poetic, and written very well.  you kinda killed me at the end there.  i was not expecting that, with how light and cute it was until then.  but i kinda like having my heart ripped out from time to time.  beautiful sadness makes me feel alive.  thanks for writing that.  i really like the vm idea too.  hope to see more from you soon =)


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