I absolutely loved this

If this is your first time writing smut, I can't WAIT to see what you've got with some practice!!! This was really well done!

So, so good. Added to my list to read again another time. 

Unbelievable, albeit interesting, circumstances but the smut was hot, can't deny that! Congrats on your first smut fic! Hopefully you can integrate it into some kind of plot in future fics <3 I can only imagine Inuyasha showing up and doing a double take on what ever the heck everyone was distracted by XD Also: Sess wearing shorts. Too funny. 

Wow. Different! Interesting story line. Bravo. That was a great for your first smut. Wouldnt have known if you didnt point it out! Looking forward to more! 

Lemon was fantastic! The act was forced but they were so into each other.....ahhh, awesome! Glad Naraku got it with his own sword. Bastard.I know some like her, but I'm glad Kagura got too. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!

its been a while since i read a good 'forced to screw in public' fic, and you had a really clever and interesting take on it.  i really enjoyed it, and was super invested thru and thru.  great job!  please write more =)

Great job!  Your story stars the classic Sess/Kag pair, plus our favorite villain, the irreplaceable Naraku.  And Byakuya and Kagura, too!  (Kagura is my favorite female InuYasha character, it's too bad you killed her off!)

This single-chapter story is very long and the centerpiece sex scene is long and intimate - very good work.  The spaced-out paragraphs make it easy to read.

I like that Naraku gets his comeuppance, the bastard.  Making Sesshomaru and Kagome (or others) have sex in front of him for his own entertainment sounds exactly like something he would do, and is something I myself am writing him as doing.

The surprise entrance of Sango and InuYasha near the end was very cool.  I think you were a little hard on Byakuya, though - I always thought of him as a generally good-natured guy, though constrained by a built-in obedience to Naraku.  And I hoped that Kagura would live - she did seem to be disgusted by Naraku's behavior, showing some sympathy for Sesshomaru and Kagome.

Thanks for posting!