I'm compelled to leave a review every chapter, i think. hope you don't mind!
love the descriptive words, the interactions, everything thus far!
mim (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Jul 2020
Ah, I'm hooked!
Loving this story so far!
The awkwardness is endearing. He's had retainers but didn't seem to learn enough. Poor Kagome.
silence (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Jul 2020
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I'm liking this story so far! I like your characterization of Sesshomaru. 100% in-character!
Mecca (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Jul 2020
Oh Sess. As tactless and blunt as ever, although it does seem he recognizes when he's being especially heartless with that last line. Are we seeing glimpses of his actual consideration over her wellbeing...? Curious. Love this!
silence (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jul 2020
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Funny how he still refuses to use her real name, lol
Mecca (Chapter 3) - Sat 04 Jul 2020
Holy moly. Yeah, I think I am going to need more chapters to read please! This is very good so far, and both are very much in character, it's delicious. Very much curious as to why Sesshoumaru is able to touch her without consequence... I imagine that will come handy later ;)
Mecca (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jul 2020
I wasn't expecting this type of canon continuance so far but I am very much enjoying it! Enjoying the way you're portraying several-centuries more older Sess and grief-stricken Kagome. So glad I have more chapters to read :)
meomeo (Chapter 3) - Thu 02 Jul 2020
Rin's descendant could give Kagome the land so she can save it for Sesshomaru. XD
Loved it, that was a great chapter.
Jean (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Jun 2020
Great start so far! Cant wait to read more!
Lmao! Like it was nothing. Somehow adorable.
Tai (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Jun 2020
Great so far! Thanks for writing! Sesskag is hard but so worth it.
meomeo (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Jun 2020
This sounds so nostalgic and I love this Sesshomaru. It makes sense he did not remember a human from 500 years ago. I could not wait for the following chapters. This is very cool! Thank you!
Neelixonee (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
I look forward to delving into how Sesshoumaru has changed. So many protray him as the same stoic entity with minor modifications, but you got to wonder what time does. Look at Totosai. The dude is oooold and obviously frayed a bit. Myoga a bit as well. I find that the most fun and realistic versions of the lord are the ones where's he's been put through the ringer of time and came out scarred or quirky in some way or another.
Super excited!
Pfairy (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Well done. I'm really excited about this story!
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