Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.
I think this was my favorite chapter yet. There were some details from the past that were uncovered, but the pace was perfect and you covered several scenes, focusing on a few characters' emotions. It was nice to see. Love that you tied in the shrine in the future into the story. We had no idea why someone would put a roof on a well house, but now it makes sense. Scary how the past is so set in stone.
Who is sending these yurei to spy on Kagome? Who hates Inari-sama? And now that Kagome has take possession of her family shrine, will she stay a few days longer? Request that a house be built where hers is in Tokyo? Will she mark the Goshinboku as sacred now or later?
Hoping Rin and Inuyasha don't run into too much trouble back home. He has to prove himself, but they have enough on their plate as is.
Loving this story so far. Hope you're having a fantastic Christmas/Holiday season, and that you have a safe and happy new year.
Lauren (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Dec 2021
Hunted. That makes sense. Now to figure out who is upset with Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and/or Inari. That'll be a long list.
Lauren (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Dec 2021
An interesting beginning. Who attacked Kagome? Why aren't they investigating that first? How long has it been since she came back to the past? Why were she and Shippo alone and where were they going?
Sayuri (Chapter 9) - Mon 20 Dec 2021
Such an amazing story. I just couldn't leave it! I read it till I reached the end of it! Thank you so much for such a great work!
Guest (Chapter 9) - Sat 18 Dec 2021
I'm very happy to see Inuyasha on a path to redemption!
I was excited to see the new chapter. I love seeing Kagome being a Mom to Shippo and Rin. I have such a soft spot for it. I appreciate you taking the time to update, :).
As always I'm blown away at this story.. keep up the good work I love how things are moving along
Hope to see more soon
Kida Kitsune (Chapter 9) - Tue 14 Dec 2021
Thank you thank you for this wonderful chapter! That was most beautiful!! Happy Holidays!!
Kit (Chapter 8) - Sun 03 Oct 2021
Love it so far!! Please keep writting
Kit (Chapter 8) - Sun 03 Oct 2021
Love it so far!!
I came to the end of this story way too fast ???????????? I really like the storyline !!!! Few people have done the whole "kagome turning into a Kami" but they over do her persona to the point where she's not even herself. Thank you for keeping their characters as close as possible ??
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