I love this Fi. I can't wait to see what tricks inukimi has in mind :)
Another great chapter.... So Kagome can astral project herself I believe all Kami would be able to even some humans. Anyways, at least Kagome found out Raijin and his familiar Raiju are not out to kill her but to keep an eye on her even protect her when she cannot. Well at least Sesshomaru is understanding what his feelings are telling him even though he tries not to believe it. LOL...
The fun Kimi must be thinking up oh I can't wait to see what is planned. Now for Inu Yasha well he had to have betrayed Sesshomaru in the worst of ways, like siding with the south or something to that nature. I also believe Kagome begged the person responsable not to hurt her family/friends and he was from the south. Now with the Yurei could that have something done when her soul was torn from her body to bring Kikyo back to life?
Man I can't imagine the hellish things that are in that cave.. Wonder who is actually hiding within? Could it be the devil himself wanting a bit of charity.... No but there is something that keeps bringing Kagome to that place to meet her end and that's not good.... Wonder who is actually after her and why?
Update soon.
Welcome back, I'm happy you've returned because I'm addicted to this story. Haha what did she say?! Hahaha I could hazard a guess
I'm amazed. Really. Such original plot. Really. I'm in love. And I hope the next one doesn't take too long.
Say, maybe I missed something but she didn't read sessho's thoughts. Wich was kind of disappointing. Because I was curious. But I so I could understand. Because it would be too easy if se reads him. How did he learn to hide them?
Congrats for your new job. And I was going to say take your time writing the next one. Because everyone has a life outside this. Buuuut please, for the sake of my heart, I hope that your time isn't extremely long.
Siiiim, thanks for this amazing history. See you soon.
Oh no! Take your time. There's no need to rush
I really like where the story is going and I'm honestly giggling at the thought of kagome copy+pasting hold bars. Also I'm very curious who this little boy is, I hope he's not bad.
Ovela (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Oct 2020
Oh my I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see how this evolves!
Jade (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Oct 2020
This is absolutely 1000% amazing!!!!! I love it soooooooooooo much! <3
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Oct 2020
Love it!! Sorry to hear about your iPad!
Can't wait for the next chaptee!!
Loved the chapter, I do wonder if it were the Southern Lord that had Kagome killed! Likely he knew of a prophecy which led to Kagome and had her killed before it could happen, but failed when she revived that was probably the reason he was at the Western Palace early to end her life before a shrine could be built.
Anyways, the greatings could have gone a bit better, Kagome did not scan the area for malovent intent or thoughts of upsurping. Especially scanning the Southen Lord now that they were out in the open. Well now were in for some needy information on the wild child..... could it be one of the fate's or other diety. Can't wait to find out...
Loved the chapter hope for a longer one hope everything flows correctly for you.
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2020
Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!!
OMG that was a wonderful chapter I LOVED IT. I thought it was Raiden probably the same Kami just spelled differently yeah I know too much Mortal Combat... LOL Anyways I love the flow of the story and how everyone is working to hide Kagome. Wonder why the southern lord is there probably to see if he can gain something from the Wests boon.
I do hope they figure out why the kami is after Kagome and start having the humans and demons pray for Kagome's health and power so she can become stronger. Hm. wonder if Kagome is up for wearing a toga..... LOL
I'm glad she has Sango and Miroku with her at least now she won't be so lonely. Speaking of friends what happened to Inu Yasha? When if at anytime will he make himself known? Hopefully shrines for Kagome will be built all over Japan even if they are not lavishly done. The more the better. Have shrines built under water and deep within the ground for those that dwell there helps a bit doncha think? Any great chapter loved it I will be waiting for the next installment.
Keep up the good work.. I told myself I would wait for more chapters before I read more lol did not happen as soon as I got the alert saying you updated I flew to read it lol..
Cant wait for more
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