I wanna find out what Sesshoumaru meant by "show you"...  ^_* 

I cannot...I repeat. I CANNOT stress how much I've enjoyed this. Your prompt was one of a kind and you KILLED it with this piece, Dross! Standing ovation all around! <3

I am so incredibly sad that this is a one-shot! I feel like it is so rare to find a story that leaves you on the edge of your seat, wanting more. To me this felt like an epic series with an unbearable cliffhanger at the end of the season. So many questions! If not Naruku, then who? Does Inu and the group know about their proposition? Were they alive? Why did they let the war get so bad before joining forces? Had they been on good (or even friendly) terms before hatching out this plan? Was Kagome single, or with Inuyasha prior to this event occurring? With someone else? SO. MANY. QUESTIONS! 

If ever you feel like continuing this, I will be among the first to devour it. Brilliant. Bravo. Encore! (Please T.T lol)

I wish it was longer, it was very interesting and well written. I wish I knew more of their feelings prior to this moment.

Hello,

this read was exciting and confusing at the same time and I loved it!

First I thought Sesshoumaru was going to kill someone she's feeling close to. She said after all that all hope was lost since he appeared. Turned out he was going to make her his mate...You know exactly how to lead your readers on, Dross! :)

While trying to figure out what was going on and being confused as heck, you worked in the prompt. It had a great impact because it was something *familiar* and it kind of led me out of that confused state. I don't know if my wording makes any sense...just trying to say that the *timing* was on point. XD

You described the bonding process painfully slow and that shows what a talented writer you are! You did not only give me the opportunity to follow Kagome's experience you were also able to word the whole process beautifully! Colourful wording with emotional highs and no repetitions. There ain't anything you could have done better here! <3

Thank you so much for sharing!