Ah, I'm worries for Mizuki because of the jewel! I hope Kagome and Sesshomaru can go back into the past to protect her!
So this is a unique story, and I do like some parts of it such as Rin being reincarnated as Kagome's child. The first chapter was a little confusing to read because I couldn't who was speaking the dialogue, and it took me a little bit to figure that out since you jumped around, but never really explained who was speaking to whom. I also am wondering why you choose to avoid the word "said" in your writing?
Now off to read the rest.
Nice chapter.
Wow its been a while since you posted an update glad you did meanial tasks and dressing down can always be fun... lol loved it. Can't wait till they start training.
Great story.
That was a nice chapter well done update soon.
That was an interesting chapter can't wait for another update.
I've read all the chapters you have posted to leave this review... What a wonderful new story with a different set up I loved it. Having Rin reincarnated as Mizuki was another wonderful idea. What got me was the comentary between them. Didn't much care for it seeing how Sesshomaru contridicted himself while speaking to kagome. That's no biggie at least that part is over. What caught my attention in this last chapter was that both their eyes were supposed to be gone so why did Shippo's green eyes blink before they healed him? Update soon can't wait to read more...
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