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SmilingFool (Chapter 16) - Sun 20 Jun 2021

That was a great chapter at least they are getting closer....  Still thinks its that 3/4 yokai they gave Inu Yasha job too...  wonder if I'm right?  We'll see...


SmilingFool (Chapter 15) - Tue 15 Jun 2021

That was a sad and fun chapter loved it.  At least Kagome was there with her dad when he passed.  Must have been hard to write that part...  Anyways, her visits over and I wonder what Kimi found out?  Hopefully Inu Yasha won't be an ass anymore. 


kaoruhana (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Jun 2021

Another good chapter: my favorite part was again the scents. I just liked the explanations you gave regarding them, and how her scent changed because of trauma.  I'm doing a terrible.job explaining because I'm tired, but I just liked you concept of the scents?  

PI'll have a better explanation when I'm not tired

 


Avi (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Jun 2021

I really love this story so far! I'm interested in the development of Koga and Kagome's relationship, it would be great to have a spin off story detailing parts of their relationship until sesshomaru's shows up


SmilingFool (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Jun 2021

That was a great chapter you've done well for th ptsd issues..  At least now Sesshomaru snd Hitomi know the extent of the damage done and how Kagome fights back becoming stronger in the long run...  One day at a time she'll a bit closer to how she used to feel.  Love the tanabata festival hopefully everyone's wishes come true.   Thank you.


Valasaurus (Chapter 13) - Fri 11 Jun 2021

I swear it's almost like if sess were heaven sent just for her


Mecca (Chapter 13) - Wed 09 Jun 2021

You make me want to cry sometimes, I love how much fluff service is in this story, sigh. Thank you for this awesome update! 


Nilee1 (Chapter 13) - Tue 08 Jun 2021

"Every me and every you" Wow, this is a great chapter and a great story! 


SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Tue 08 Jun 2021

Again another great chapter loved this one though at least Kagome got her point across telling Hojo off must have been thrilling for her as equally drained glad she got the visit over with her former childhood friends and that everythings in place hopefully they find who's setting them up hopefully its not Toran or the ass hole Inu Yasha...  Until next time.... love this story.


SmilingFool (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Jun 2021

Wow Kagome's family is fun to be around and the stories I'm sure her family love hearing. About time that jack ass got kicked to the curb.....  Now he realizes what he has done and has to pay the price.  I hope its not going to lead him onto a bad path....  Anyways Sesshomaru finally comes clean letting them know why he hadn't come around as often eventually disapearing..  So sad to hear that but then what they have now was worth the wait I think.  Loved the chapter...  Update soon


bookgirl813 (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Jun 2021

I'm glad Inu realizes he's lost Kagome.  Beyond that, he realizes he really messed up and yes, he was at fault.  What he does with this realization will show whether he owns it and grows from it.

Great update!


Valasaurus (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Jun 2021

Inuyasha is truly despicable. Ruining her family reunion all for the sake of saving face? I hope karma hits him hard


kaoruhana (Chapter 11) - Fri 04 Jun 2021

I think this was your best written chapter.  No really, this story seems to be really good when written in present sense.  Not that your other writing was bad, but this chapter just read really really well.  

Also, don't apologize for writing what needed to be rewritten.  The reunion wasn't going to be happy times and it's fine that it was that way.  

And my favorite part of this chapter: the way you described her scent.  I loved the imagery you provided becuase it really just hit home that:
1) Kagome had changed, and 2) the description clearly painted a picture in your head of her scent.  

Another great chapter!  


SmilingFool (Chapter 11) - Thu 03 Jun 2021

Knew that asshole would get to her family first to try and sooth things over for himself but he totally forgot what he's done jack ass.  It was no wonder why Kagome began screaming withdrawing in her head hell I'd do that too along with kicking some behind.  I wonder why he hadn't noticed that Kagome and Sesshomaru mated?  Didn't see Inu Yasha blow up about that yet...  

Still I figured Inu Yasha would cling to Kagome for reasons of the past but to go to this length is beyond obsession and Kagome says he's dangerous?  Okay so does that mean he's helping those who are kidnapping other yokai?  Or the newer threat?  So many wonders not enough answers.... 

 

Well at least Kagome and Sesshomaru gave th updates on what happened hopefully having her mother again will lighten her spirit?  update soon.


SmilingFool (Chapter 10) - Mon 31 May 2021

Awesome chapter you've done a great job on this loved it.  Update soon.


Valasaurus (Chapter 10) - Mon 31 May 2021

You are doing an amazing job of explaining. I wonder if these same "humans" have something to do with Kags previous attack, or the stalker at her window


bookgirl813 (Chapter 9) - Sat 29 May 2021

I had wondered at the timing of when Kagome was stuck in the past versus when her family saw her. That will be an interesting reunion, especially with the chant of favor regard Inuyasha.  Who is also most likely going to a complete jerk when he discovers what just transpired here. 
I'm glad she has such a supportive group around her and I absolutely adore Sesshomaru's mom!   


bookgirl813 (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 May 2021

Great portrayal of what happened in Kagome's past. It explains a lot, but not quite why Inu is such a jerk, now. Is it because he's still emotionally stunted, guilt, or is there more to the tale?  Hmm. I'll continue to read and see what transpires!


bookgirl813 (Chapter 3) - Sat 29 May 2021

Ah, the tension is so thick you can cut it with a knife!  So much fun watching the dance. 
It's a shame that Inu is so immature And has to take out his angst on Kags.  


bookgirl813 (Chapter 2) - Sat 29 May 2021

Gre chapter 2 - established the team and some of the personalities, as well as the friction between Inu and Kags. I'm curious about that, but will wait as I am sure it will come out. Inu seems to still be extremely immature if he's still using "he tried to kill you before" as a reason for not having Sesshomaru on her team. What a bonehead. 


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