It was such a beautiful experience to read this piece. I loved the way Kagome's thoughts have been put, seeing the transition of the past Sesshoumaru to the current one. It gives the vibes of how Kagome would be having a surreal feeling in the moment. Also... Poor InuYasha.. Lol.. Loved it.. Keep up the good work! 

Oh my this was beautiful!  I loved this!  The details, the way Sesshomaru is described, the intimacy of the moment captured in such few words but so beautifully done.  Thank you for sharing this!  It was such a delight to read!