Well, at least he doesn't want to kill Kagome anymore. And I think I miss the older version of Kaede
This chapter was quite concise, many facts and emotions so fast.
It's hard to imagine a serious little Kaede, so practical.
And you have exposed the variety and gravity of circumstances of both of them. And while it is understandable the conflict within Sesshomaru's mind, pleeeeeease go and kill the girl? It's not her fault either!
Also whats that if she is his fiancée and therefore he has the right to do whatever he wants with her, nooooooo (well, it is the 1500 but still) Let's just hope that Kagome made it very clear that things are not like that.
I hope Kikyo is not dead. And why did Inuyasha deny their relationship? What's going on here
Another wonderful chapter and finally meeting Inuyasha. I love this story. You've done a great job with the characters. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Loving this fic! I'm excited to see where it goes!
CrysV (Chapter 9) - Wed 08 Jun 2022
I've caught up. Brilliant! Loved every chapter. You really capture Kagome to a T. I'm enjoying the slow burn and especially the humor. Can't wait for the next update!
CrysV (Chapter 2) - Tue 07 Jun 2022
Wow! I'm only on chapter 2 and I'm hooked. This is the first fix of yours that I've ever read, but I think I've found my new favorite SessKag author. Your storytelling is intriguing and your writing is near impeccable (grammar, spelling, etc). A person's writing is very important for me to get into a fic. You have a great balance of description and dialogue to keep me interested.
I'm excited to not only read this story, but all your other fics if this one is anything to go by. Thank you so much for your hard work!
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