OMG! This is so good. Idk how you were able to capture so ,uch emotion in a one shot but this was amazing! Also, please tell us what happens to Inuyasha,Shippo, and Rin.
It started really lovely and I really liked the way it was going.. But in my opinion I felt as if towards the end it became kind of all over the place. I really loved the initial romance when their feelings were developing.. Overall, keep it up..
