Wow those were some chapters man poor Kagome can''t catch a break....  Seiobo really does hate humans.  I thought it funny when the guards were carrying Kagome to the Western Palace by her arms while she quietly observed was awesome.  Kagome standing up to the Empress even looking into her eyes warrented death yet she still did it trying to figure how to get away and go home.  Loved when she blasted the guards that was cool.  Sesshomaru sudden appearance was welcome by both Kagome and Seiobo.  He saved thats what counts. 

This story rocks, really I enjoyed all the new chapter 12 to 16, made my morning read so much better wish there were more chapters I'm so caught up into this fic i missed my morning meal....  LOL Ha ha ha....  Anyways, great work loved the updates....  Keep them coming....

I'm definitely interested in seeing how this plays out very well written thank u for posting ur work its absolutely beautiful 

Wow what an interesting take of the Inu Yasha story.  Sorry I didn't leave other reviews but I just got so eager to read more.  

Well I have to say I love it... Truly a great fic and love how the story blends with Chinese/Japanese cultures..  Can't wait to read more.

I love it and your edits! I cant wait until you post book two and what will happen to Kagome vs the his mom! I sense drama on the horizon! xD

^_^/ Good luck! <3