I love, love, love, love, love this story!
Very original plot, me love it.
This is all very sweet. I like it a lot, even with Sess' slight OOCness. Your writing and the story makes it unimportant and secondary.
Poor Kagome went through a lot of bad things, and it's good she trusts Sesshomaru enough to confide in him. He'll protect her, after all, he's a dog (at heart at least, for he's obviously not youkai in your story... or is he? -mischievous grin-)
Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter.
Dewa mata
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