LOL those were great chapters loved them hopefully Kagome got to tell Sango the jist of what happened even though Kagome didn't want to go with Sesshomaru it was for the best for the time being. What his beast did pissed off the dragon now Sesshomaru will have to pay the price.
This was perfect, as expected. But I want to point out a few mistakes, probably slipped past you.. The last line should be either 'the last thing' or 'the least', you had mixed it up. And lastly, the last line of the second last paragraph sounds weird. I didn't understand what you were trying to convey.
oh I forgot to mention the fact that I definitely like the fact that Sesshoumaru has realized his mistake and regrets it. And the fact that he's putting so much effort,even though he's not used to being told what to do, he still listened to her, bth when she asked him to leave and when she said she said she would talk to Inuyasha.. I absolutely love his character here
just can't wait to read what happens next. just can't wait to see them madly in love with each other.. like truly maadly deeply..!!!
please update soon
REDWOLF (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jun 2022
Kagome needs to run away. Go to the well.. Be done with this. Exciting chapter.
Ugh...he certainly needs lessons in basic communication skills. Poor Kags! Inuyasha is going to flip!
It's going to take a very long time for this wound to heal.
Kagome needs to get her pretty bottom back to the well, back to the furure and away from this Sesshoumaru.
Holy crap!! This is not going to be good!
Tami (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Jun 2022
Es demasiado genial esta historia y amo la efectividad de la semilla de seshh ????
This is such a sad horrific beginning. It's going to take a lot to get through this.
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