Oh no! This could go bad quickly. 

I think the pacing on this is spot on. 

Honestly I feel like you could do a thesis on this fanfic. The issue here is that Kagome is the quintessential example of forgiveness. But we see time and time again that Kagome may forgive but she doesn't forget ( I mean canonically she is shown pining after Inuyasha despite of all his transgressions but also being pissed off as hell about both her wasting her time and his actions).

She's also so loyal that I can't imagine in less than half a year, she'll forgive the guy who literally raped her and stole her "happily ever after" that she's been dreaming of. And yes of course, I'm going to want my homeboy Sesshomaru to get the girl but he's gonna have to PROVE to her that despite their terrible start - he's the right one for her. I'm thinking he's gonna have to either die for her and she resurrects him with Tenseiga or that Inuyasha goes and gets a new girl (but this one she can still pine for Inuyasha bc technically he's not at fault).

I know I want to speed things along but what makes this fic so raw and real is the growth that each character goes through. Yes I want Sesshomaru to fall madly deeply in love with her before she ever even gets there. 

Good grief...Kagome is still pining after Inuyasha. I wish she would find out he's already taken another mate. I hope Inuyasha would just let go too, but I fear he won't. Kagome needs to see what is right in front of her. Seeshoumaru needs her so much and I hope she realizes he didn't mean for this to happen. I believe his beast always loved her from the beginning.

My heart is bleeding for Sesshoumaru, I know it's a part of the story telling process and they've both gone through trauma, but ahhhh, Sesshoumaru be strong! I love how you truly bring forth his character in this story and his turbulent inner thoughts and emotions. 

It didn't work well last time...

Now Kagome can see what his beast had done to her but what it has done to him as well to the point of self injury to ensure her safety....  Poor Sesshomaru.

Vaya. Lástima que no tuvieron más tiempo para seguir mejorando su relación!

Pobres no les dan ni un respiro.

Kag ya acepto que no es bueno para su bebé nacer como ilegítimo.

Así que terminará cediendo.

Quizás él pueda marcarla sin que tengan relaciones sexual es.

Si. Eso solucionaría por el momento el dilema.

Oh boy...

Beautiful chapter. He's smitten. Thank you. 

How they gonna pressure them to mate?! Outrageous! Square up

Oh man the shit really has hit the fan....  Uh oh what will they do now?  Sesshomaru must mark Kagome will she be able to do this?  Will Sesshomaru?  Just when things were coming along the Emperor had to send the missive...

He likes her face!

A most pleasant chapter one of progress things are looking up....

This story is so damn good! Like yesssss Kagome, better use that futuristic knowledge to improve the kingdom. Let them know you paid attention in class girl!

And the way you write eveyone is so conceivable that nothing feels like a reach, but moe so all in place. Also love the fact that Sessh isn't wiriting things off as an overall blessing, but acknowledges that she's making the most out of something that was literally her nightmare. Because he KNOWS that's true Kagome fashion, to selflessly put others above her own pain.

Would love to see how he responds to that moving forward and how these two might grow closer.

Awesome chapter and will Sesshoumaru's mom show up again before the fight to see any of the changes? Just curious and stay safe.

When life gives you lemons.

Si. Hasta el parece que Kag no ha salido ganando en nada.

Pero se que con el tiempo habrá alguien que la amará y adorará como se merece.

Pero a veces me pregunto si ese será Sess.

Después de todo ni siquiera se sabe porqué él la atacó.

Tampoco se sabe si podría hacerle lo mismo a otra hembra.

Si. Hasta el momento parece que Kag no a salido ganando en nada.

Pero se que con  el tiempo habrá alguien que la amará y adorará como se merece.

Pero a veces me pregunto si ese será Sess.

Después de todo ni siquiera se sabe porqué él la atacó.

Tampoco se sabe si podría hacerle lo mismo a otra hembra.

Si. Hasta el momento parece que Kag no a salido ganando en nada.

Pero se que co  el tiempo habrá alguien que la amará y adorará como se merece.

Pero a veces me pregunto si ese será Sess.

Después de todo ni siquiera se sabe porqué él la atacó.

Tampoco se sabe si podría hacerle lo mismo a otra hembra.

Perhaps, some healing all around. Lovely chapters. Thank you.