I loved this story so much that after I finished it last night, I started it up again today. Thank you for the story! Please, update as often as you can
Totally in love with the scene with Sesshoumaru pacing outside of Kagome's barrier, like an agitated apex hunter. <3
'Sesshoumaru paused his pacing, his crimson-tinted eyes staring her down. Then, his lips curved into a slow, fanged smirk as he purred, “Kagome.” He let her name roll off his tongue, rich with a dark promise.'
<3
I also love the progression of Sesshoumaru effectively lowering Kagome's defenses/barrier with his words of affirmation - how he slowly got closer to her the more she dropped the barrier. You really have a way with words. The shift Kagome goes through - going from uncertain and unsure to bold was a pleasure to read, too.
With Sesshoumaru, you've really hit the nail on the head when it comes to finding the right balance of fierce, royal warrior and romantic, assertive Alpha. With Kagome, you also hit the nail on the head when it comes to finding the right balance of strong, powerful Priestess and caring, sweet Alpha woman.
*Beautifully done.*
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 51) - Sun 25 Aug 2024
It was a great fight, but I do wish Sesshoumaru revived his troops the same way he revived the Southern servants, before he whisked Kagome away. Maybe he'd already revived them once during the war, so they couldn't be saved by Tenseiga again? Hm..
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 41) - Sun 25 Aug 2024
I'm in love with the art added into the chapters!
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 38) - Sat 24 Aug 2024
The scene with InuYasha's torture...left me in shock for a good 5-6 minutes. Wow.
Hannah (Chapter 53) - Sat 24 Aug 2024
I had a really bad day yesterday but this update added a little joy to it. Thank you
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 29) - Fri 23 Aug 2024
The added picture of Kagome in Sesshoumaru's silk haori was beautiful! This story is a work of art.
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 23) - Fri 23 Aug 2024
Sesshoumaru's letter was so romantic and sweet. I am loving this story.
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 15) - Fri 23 Aug 2024
"Taking great care to open the paper pouch without tearing it, Sesshoumaru finally set his amber eyes on its contents.
Dear Sesshoumaru,
Look here you Son of a Bitch-"
I cried in laughter! I loved her whole letter (and so did Sesshoumaru ;D) and your writing is such a pleasure to read! I am entertained, thoroughly!
Onward to the next chapter, I go!
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