sesshomaru the player never thought to read that.....  LOL...  Anyways still wondering when Kagome is going to make herself known?

No way, ah man Sesshomaru is an ass.  How could he do something like that....  Oh now he's thinking it was a bad idea to notify her people...  Not only did Sesshomaru lose Hyouga he also lost the pups he did not know he had....  Wonder if he ever will...  now will Hyouga rise from her wound or will she die giving Sesshomaru the freedom he once wanted.

I am absolutely enamored with the story! I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru! The way that he pays such care and attention to Rin and his new Phoenix is fantastic. I appreciate the way you write about his instincts and thoughts. I'm excited for this story to continue developing! I was surprised at the jump in timeline but I think you handled it well! I would love to see some reflections from the past year by the characters as that is a long time to be caring for someone so intently. I'm curious about the phoenixes and why they want her back after abandoning her completely. 

This is a cool story I like it, but when does Kagome enter the story?