Hi there.
I know thus review is years after the fact bit I just wanted you to know that I love this story and I think your lemon-writing is very good, much better than many writers'. I do wish you would expand the take with a Part 3 or epilogue, just so we'd know what happened to Sesshomaru and Kagome after their night together. Does he get his lands back? Does Kag manage to rebuff her suitors? Will they meet again? And most importantly, will Sesshomaru finally understand Kagome is his one and only?
Here's hoping you still get notifications and that you're still inspired. Thanks for sharing your talent.
oh why did this have to end? what happen next is all I can say....wow what a lemon.
Ameire (Chapter 2) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
How can you think that sucks? It was great~ Please continue the story? I really like it and wanna see what's going to happen.
Thankyou, and please update soon *puppy dog eyes*
Solaira (Chapter 2) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
I really enjoyed this story and thought that the lemon was well written...I do not see a reason for you to have someone else write the lemons for you at all......btw.....I really would love to see you turn this into a full blown story.....this is an excellent plot and just begs to be continued.
l33t (Chapter 2) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
Just to let you know, this is far from sucking, and I believe you should make this into a story. It was great and I would love for you to continue to write this. This is so original compared to many other stories I have read.
Phoenix (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Dec 2008
You've got to be kidding me! Give up writing lemons?!! I don't think so! I've heard that writers are not always satisfied with their efforts but most of the time, readers don't have those qualms. I definitely appreciate your work.
| It doesn't suck really. I like the story and would like to know what happens later. So if you would please continue writing chapters for this, maybe come up with an actual name, but it really was good.
So i understand that you wanted to practice a one shot i myself have started many attempts at them, they're not easy and i tell you yours was good, wonderful even, BUT i'm gunna need you to continue this story. you've opened up too much possibility to what could happen and what will and i really want to know if Sess got his lands back, what the other Tai did, as well as Inuyasha's and Kouga's reaction to all of this, how the loss of her virginity effects her powers, not to mention time itself and how it plays a role on her as the shikon. So it didnt effect her aura but is she still pure enough for the jewel? I WANT ANSWERS AND MORE CHAPTERS ::r0o is being a bossy reviwer!!!!:: anyway I will honestly respect if you do not wish to continue this story but i thik you could have a fantastic tale to tell here.
basically, What happens next? I'll be watching. cant wait! - r0o
Everyone else is right. Not only does this NOT suck, but the plot is actually fabulous. It's original, it's fresh, and I really REALLY hope you will actually continue on the story. I really enjoyed the characterizations, and I was completely intrigued by the plot to the point that the 'end' has left me hanging! Please continue on, and please feel confident that you have the ability to write a well done lemon!
This does not suck. You've included so much more than what was needed for a PWP. The story lead-up makes the lemon that much sweeter. Stick with your instincts; they haven't failed you thus far.
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
You should really make this a full length story. I will be one kick ass story if you did. It's a new situation that has never been used and it has all the ability to be great. Please turn it into a full length story. I will be forever happy if you did.
~*|Angel From Below|~*~|Demon From Above|*~
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Dec 2008
Oh how I wish you would continue this! I understand its just a one-shot but it's so good, I want more!
shlane (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Dec 2008
| well, even though you understimate this story i must say it's very well written and the concept i do like, it can be a great long story, and this to be the introduction to it, but if you want to keep it as a long one shot there's no problem either is fine, congratulations on a good job, and keep it up
Drianax (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Dec 2008
| Good one-shot! Although, I like whatever you happen to write, so I may be biased. I do know that when you first wrote this a few years back, you mentioned that it miht be going in a story and that it was a test case for a lemon; just wondering if that has changed at all. Anyway, good job, can't wait for the final chapter of 1000 and when is "A Kiss for a Prince going to be completed?"
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