So many chapters! I feel spoiled. Great progression, I was getting a little nervous for a while, you wrote the overwhelming scenes very well. I like the depth of emotion I can get from your story and writing style. I'm allways a little sad when I get to the end of your updates, I want to see what happens next!
Happy Sunday.
Daisuke (Chapter 7) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
| rape? not what i expected either .. good writing though, and good at first..
bye.
wow, I can't believe I hadn't noticed this story before : it's awesome.
I love your writing style, and I think everything flows very nicely =)
I really hope you'll update soon!!!!
snowbird (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| I'm not flaming over the rape. I'm just shocked at such a change in the plot of the story and the direction it's taking. It's not what I thought it would be so I'm departing as a reader. Sorry.
| I Love this story. Please update as soon as you can. And I do hope that Kagome lives through this.
| OMG!!! I freakin love this story!! I never knew that the 'Lord of the Flies' could be so good! lol. The portrayal of characters are amazing as well!! I cant wait for you to update!!
Ashes (Chapter 9) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
Hey I just found your story. Great work! I enjoy the plot line and the classic thematic elements that are embedded into it. Your imagery is good and it was an easy read; intellegent without confusing the hell out of me. Yay!
But seriously did you have to end your most recent chapter THERE?! Gah! *writhes in mock agony*
I eagerly await your next update.
Woww amazing story! I'm in in love with this story now hehe : ) I'm really surprised there's so little reviews though. This story definitely deserves more than that! I will be waiting for your updates! Keep up the great work!
And now, for good measure, I'm going to review this story on here as well. Srsly. This excellent tale does not get nearly the attention it deserves!!! Especially with its unique premise (c'mon, how many other plane crash/stranded/survivor-type Sess/Kag stories are out there?), this story should be attracting its fair share of accolades - which it hasn't, to my way of thinking. Okay, enough of my rambling. I put the meat of what I wanted to say in the ff.net review, so here I'll just say... TERRIFIC STORY!! Again, thank you so much for the enjoyment I've had so far - I will be eagerly awaiting the next exciting installment! :D ~~Wiccan~~
snowbird (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Dec 2008
| I started with this story on FFN and found your updates here. I'm so glad you decided to keep with youkai in the story because you are making their situation an integral part of the story. I just love what your imagination has created so far. It makes me want to join a pickit line and march for youkai rights! haha I can truly understand Sesshoumaru's feelings towards humans, him being a former taiyoukai and subserviant to no one. These times have to be a bitter pill for him. I caught the play on the words; "Fuck the Kami, not again!". I'm curious to eventually learn his initial reason for his fear. Due to our e-mail conversation, I have a suspicion but am curious to read your explanation.
Giulia (Chapter 4) - Mon 22 Dec 2008
| i love it! it's really refreshing to read something rarely thought of :) plus is very well written, i hope you'll update soon :D
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