This was absolutely delightful to read, your use of dry humor was excellent, and had me laughing so hard at times my sides hurt. There were a few spelling errors and misused words but nothing serious. I read through this in one sitting, I loved your protrayals of the charaters, and the way you brought in actual dog charateristics was very nice and plausable given the cercumstances. Where did that dog whistle go though, still wondering about that. I also loved the way you never rushed the plot, it had a wonderful pace that kept me glued to  my laptop till the very end...Now my only compliant is that it isn't finished*pouts*... I am going to fav this and hope that you decide to finish up the last part of the epilogue soon...Keep up your wonderful work and I will be looking foreward to more of your work in the future...

This piece was truly funny and enjoyable to read.  You were able to capture the readers attention and keep it.  There were a few misspelled/ misused words here and there but not enough to disrupt the story.  For me the ending seemed a bit short and I still had questions.  What and how was Sesshoumaru communicating with Kagome once they were traveling together?  Rin apparently knew but didn't explain the correlation between his actions and what he wanted.  I couldn't see how what Kagome did could be interpreted as her ignoring him. And although you hinted that their relationship would continue to grow, you didn't tell us exactly what the end result would be.  Perhaps you have created a sequel.  I'll be looking for it.

Overall a very well written tale.

Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it. Very well-written. The humour was very good also. You did an excellent job. I liked how you brought the characteristics of dogs into it. We've seen some with Inuyasha before so it makes sense that Sesshoumaru would show them also. Keep up the great work!

I thought this was really cute, and I loved the dry humor of the story. I think you paced it very well, not hurrying through the plot. Poor Kagome, the girl just doesn't understand inu, although she does try. I really do like your work, and will be looking for more of your stuff. Keep up the great writing. I thought your descriptive stuff was great. Sango's character was very funny, and so was Miroku. The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome was well done, and I think Kagome's concerns regarding Inuyasha's reaction to her feelings to Sesshoumaru were very realistic given his nature in the anime. Very nice job.

Luna, you evil wench you...cliffies are not good for the heart. I laughed, I cried, I cringed, I gloated, I cheered and I OOOPS for our poor Kagome. Should it make a difference that it seemed that he was interested in her and she took it upon herself to look after him when he was injured. Now that she has confessed her feelings to him....what now? Plz update it soon

Argh!!!! MS LUNA!!!! Grr that was the evilest cliffie I have read in a while.  Downright evil.  I both love you and hate you for it. 

First off: I just want to say that you’re an amazing writer.  Words can probably describe my love for your fics, but I’m not that great at expressing it. ^__^;; 

Now, I don’t care about a lemon.  All I want to know is WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!  Epilogue Part II now!! 

>.<  I’m not an update whore… (really, I’m not) but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!

I read this entire fic straight, it was that good!  If it were a book, I wouldn’t be able to put it down.  (But it’s my computer screen… o.0)

Dry humor is the best kind of humor.  I like how you insert little giggle moments here and there and be able to switch it to minor angst and DRAMA at the drop of a pin.  Now that’s skill.  You have such a knack for describing emotions and Kagome’s amusing thoughts.  Keep writing!!

ducky out!

Great start to this story Luna and I'll definitely have to come back to finish it once I've completed the rest of my assignment hehe. Only a few issues I've noticed such as posting things like '(most likely due to the soul stealers they saw floating around) ' in the middle of the story, just use commas to separate it from the rest of the sentence. I was a little put off by Kagome calling Sango a bitch, perhaps another insult would have fit better, but other than that I loved the first chapter. It was funny and the perfect amount of dry humor :).

Great start to this story Luna and I'll definitely have to come back to finish it once I've completed the rest of my assignment hehe. Only a few issues I've noticed such as posting things like '(most likely due to the soul stealers they saw floating around) ' in the middle of the story, just use commas to separate it from the rest of the sentence. I was a little put off by Kagome calling Sango a bitch, perhaps another insult would have fit better, but other than that I loved the first chapter. It was funny and the perfect amount of dry humor :).