Oh Luna- Bee! I'm going to keep this one quick, as I've already got the sequel open and waiting to go.

I love this. It was awesome! And i cant tell you how happy i am that i've found a story where you see the progression of thier relationship where it doesn't start with her needing a replacement for what she lost and it not ending up physical very fast. Heck, they hadn't even kissed at the end and i wanted to just for joy. dont get me wrong, i'm a sappy romantic that will practiclly swoon if i read a kiss thats good enough, but this was so... refreshing.

A lovely change of pace. Keep Up the good work!

Velvey - Cake

This was a good story. I loved the older Kags questioning the reasons why she could never be truly happy. Like they say "when one door closes, another opens". I wish you had mentioned why and where InuYasha had been for the last 500yrs...the last 15ys at least. He never does explain why he never came to her; instead foolishly believing that she would always wait for him...men I swear. As for Hojo, he never does apologize...figures. I loved Sess' character..it was spot on and the way that he finally opens up to her it was so heartwarming. Awesome job

Wow, this was a great story! I think that your Sess characterization was dead on... all of them were! I felt so bad for Kagome at first, but as the story went on, I began to see her pull her life back together and find something that was so much more than what she had before. This was well executed without any spelling or grammar errors that I can remember, and the pacing was really good to. I look forward to reading more from you. Excellent job!

You wrote a good story. You didn't make any grammar or spelling mistakes that I could see. Your story was clear and flowed well.  

I think it could have been more fulfilling for the reader if you gave more background information on Hojo, Inuyasha and especially Sesshoumaru. For Hojo it would have been nice to know why he cheated on her and with one of her best friends at that?  Did he really see himself as the innocent party?  In fact it would be interesting to know just what Eri was thinking and why she would turn on a friend like that. As for Inuyasha where had he been all this time?  Last but not least Sesshoumaru.  You give us an inkling of what he feels for Kagome but it's just a glimpse, mainly second hand from Kagome's thoughts and actions. For instance, what did he think of her in the feudal era? What were his thoughts about her when they met again?  Why did he ask her almost immediately if she was there to make him into an Inuyasha substitute? Why did he agree to see her in the first place? Since he's a billionaire I'm surprised his first concerns about her wanting to see him wasn't if she were after his money. Did he want them to become mates?

I think if you incorporated more information that would answer some of the questions above your story would go from just good to great.

This is a very well written story.  The plot flows perfectly, I didn't notice any grammar issues or anything and it was really nice to see a much older Kagome.  I hope to read more good stories from you in the future.

Hey!! I thought this fic was great!! I liked how the characters actually aged.  Nice touch!  I was so drawn into your story.  My favourite part (since I’m so conceited) was “You’re Becky right?”…

“No sis – I broke up with her 2 years ago…” *souta’s face:* -___-;; <stupid drunk sister>

Laaawl!!! 

I think that you’re very good at writing tragic comedy – something difficult to do.  On the one hand, I’m happy for Kagome and Sesshoumar, but I still feel bad for Inuyasha.  Everyone was in character; it was amazing!! And btw: Hojo as the cheater is something I rarely read, so including that was brilliant. 

Finally, I think that this could maybe have a oneshot sequel.  I’m dying to know what happens next: my imagination just won’t cut it!! 

ducky out!

i must say for a first time writing with this pairing it was totally awesome....i was trying to find something that needed improvement, but i came up at a loss, there might have been a few spelling errors, but they were easily missed, this was an extremely enjoyable, well written, story. I loved the classy romance between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, i hope you continue to write for this pairing and i will look forward to more of your work in the future:D

I really enjoyed this. I thought it was pretty well-written. I was slightly confused with who was getting married but you cleared that up a little later. I guess the only thing I didn't get was if Kagome and Hojo were together since university why were they getting married so much later? I guess maybe because deep down she knew it wasn't right... Anyways, keep up the good work!