Reviews for Abstinence by Luna

L-desu (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 May 2024

The first was good, but the sequel was phenomenal!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Dec 2019

It was beautiful. I know story is good when I get butterflies in my tummy.


Rose (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Aug 2016

I liked your story very much. So who was attacking Sesshamaru's trucks? 


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Apr 2013

Oh... My... God.

This was such a passionate and amazing oneshot. I loved every second of it. Every moment...!

Congratulations on such a wonderful story! This was a great read.

<3

xoxo


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Dec 2011

I read them as set so I thought i'd just review after I read them both!! They were so yummy and i adoredd Thousand Tales too, I'm just such a huge fan now and this makes me want to ready your Yasha works, what is your username on the other site so I can read more of your work!!!


Patricia (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jul 2011

Great story!! LOVED IT. it was very long so that was a nice treat. Third part? lol


Hanyounymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

That was one impressive lemon, honestly speaking XD Although I haven't really read much in the smut department, this is probably one of the best I've read. The part after was really touching, too :)

Great, I think I need a cold shower! WHAT THE HECK. =)) Just kidding ;) Amazing job~!


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Apr 2011

Wow! Luna-Bee, that cant be the ending! theirs a third oneshot right? RIGHT? *scans page for it, twice.* D: Luuuuunnnnnaaaaa. Why are you doing this to meeeee??!!!?!?!

Alright, now that I've had my moment of whineing: this series was wonderful, I find myself wishing for more and more! there are so many questions I want answered! Like whatever happened to Jaken and Rin, and Kouga! and Shippo! I keep hoping to see more about thier lives together.  Really, you captured my attention at the first word of 'Moderation' and Kept me spell bound right to the end of this one.

Great job love. you have real talent. I cant wait to see more of your work.

 

Velvy - Cake


Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

*fans self* whoo that was a steamy lemon...lmao...this was exceptionally written, and other than a few misused words, and maybe a skipped word here and there,I didn't really notice anything wrong with it. I loved this follow up, and your portral of Sesshoumaru and Kagome' s relationship was absolutley delightful, I loved how you described his emotional termoil. This was another stellar work and I will definately be looking foreward to more of your work in the future, keep up the good work:D


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
I love your idea for this fic:) "abstinence" as a theme makes it so different from most of the MA-rated stories out there! Well done!

daapatemysoul (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Jan 2009
God damn, that was HOT! And oh, so wonderfully written. Congrats on a great one shot. I like how you used a bit of jealously to help bring them closer together again. The whole thing was fantabulous.

Merely Truth (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Jan 2009
I always love it when Sesshoumaru is affraid to hurt the girl he loves ! The stories are so gooooood ! Yours is delightful ! A short lemon, but different than usual, and the true mating part was very special and well described. Congratulations ! I hope you’ll be able to repeat the experience in future writing… Thank you for your story, A french mother and reader, Bonjour de la France ! Merely Truth

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