I liked that one even more than the preceding story! You write Sesshomaru beautifully.
Oh Luna-Bee. This was truely lovely. I might even like it better than the one through Kagomes point of view! This one just has so much more detail and emotional depth! You really get to see inside sesshoumarus head. I was surprised at first, I didn't think I would like the idea of Him fighting a major depression, but really i'm quite fond of it. And his relationship with Rin was so cute! I thought I was going to squeel with joy when he ate that monstrocity of a cake for her.
Really Lovey, I adore it. If you haven't noticed, I'm slowly making my way through your page.... stalking your stories and eading everything. ^^
Personally, I just love giving my opinions on great stories.
As Always, I love your writing and cant wait to see more of it.
Velvy - Cake
Amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Jul 2010
UNBELIEVABLY WONDERFUL STORY, I LIKED THE PROGRESS THROUGH TIME!MORE PLEASE!
You have really good ideas ut just some advice don't post them all at once do a reak and people woll read more but I loved it very good ides!
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