Wow... this is messed up. I would be smaking Sesshomaru around like he owed me money!! I think Kagome has done a good job getting revenge so far... not enough though! He needs to pay, Sango needs to pay, and her family needs to pay. Far out I hope she RUINS them all.
very very intense chapter though I am a little confussed when she said " All that was left was this imposter" I am not really sure what she ment by that, and the whole Loose yourself thing is humm kind of weird, now I know a women want to get out of a relationship but then don't do it because maybe just maybe the guy can be forgivin but if she thinks that she can not get out of her marriage then she is crazy and not so smart. she can get out, it just takes a lote of will power and how much you want to survie and who you want to protect. I hope she gets out and ends up happy, not with Sesshomaru, but with someone that trully loves her.
Great chapter so far, can't wait to read more.
hugs
megan007
jk (Chapter 9) - Mon 09 May 2011
i liked suspense is buildin but i think she should leave him n go with naraku till sessh gets his head together make him sweat a bit ;P
jk (Chapter 9) - Mon 09 May 2011
i liked suspense is buildin but i think she should leave him n go with naraku till sessh gets his head together make him sweat a bit ;P
amy (Chapter 9) - Mon 09 May 2011
I hope they can get back together, after he can contol himself, and keep it in his pants with other women and not get "HYPNOTIZED BY ASSES AND CHESTS".
Mia (Chapter 9) - Sun 08 May 2011
Hi tis is Mia an i absoulty adored tis chap love it i never expected tis and it was awesome jus a few days ago my bf an i fell out but d way he made it up 2 me was so awesome i dont know wat i would do if he ever cheated on me no i know exactly wat i would do i would leave his assan tell him hot gal do fight over man especially if i married to u. u felt so deprived tat u needed 2 seek attention from a whore hell no and if he tried 2 stop me i will beat him like i did the last time oh yea me an my bf fought be 4 he was like i love a girl tat could defend herself and asked me to go out with him by the way we r on vacation wondering y so cant tell but lets just say I'M DADDY"S LITTLE GIRL AND LITTLE ANGEL anything i want i get lol. My bf want to put someting up.
Just 4 the record she never beat me up i allowed her to do tat trust me if u had her as a gf u would love 2 see her get all fiesty. and we never fought we resteled and 4 ur info it was on a bed a very soft 1 ouch y did u pinch me i'm a get u back tonight trust me babe i know ur weak spots all of tem.
ok its me he wont let me take it down i think i wanna say by a friend 2nite he i relly vicious wen he stays sometin like tat i should not hav started it i'm still recovering from tat last wat do u say "play fight". Any way love ur story and hope there is more 2 come and i know that what ever u decide 2 go wit it would be awesome just dont let him hit her again i wanted to cry sensitivevery he is laughing at me. dont want 2 do anything to get my self in more trouble tan i am already in. Should i make a profile. i know i got off topic i kind a do tat alot not often thou. llove ur story update soon kk love ur story gonna check i u hav anymore that i can read. lol i should know the answer to tat already but i dont i not an encycleopida lol read ur reviews later i'm iin 4 a bad punisment haha it is gonna be so fun freakazoid
amy (Chapter 7) - Tue 19 Apr 2011
Excellent job! please complete the story with all the juicy detaiks like how hard her hubby will grovel tp keep his company and life, please keep her strong in her purpose ,don't let Naraku sidetrack her!
amy (Chapter 6) - Sun 17 Apr 2011
SAdly enough I liked it, having almost lost a husband to another ,I can't blame her for what she is about to do, remove his business and baby, don't make her leave him! make him stay with her in another room, not able to be with her until she is ready, their daughter should not lose her father!
Angel (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Apr 2011
OMG!! I love this. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Fair Oma (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Apr 2011
oh my lord. this was one of the most funniest stories i have read in a long time. but i hope u make Sess suffer for a long time . Put his nuts threw a nut cracker a couple times to make him understand just how nasty what he did was :) i am looking forward to the next chapter and the ones after that too :)
Mimiru (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Apr 2011
OMG an UPDATE O_O! Where've you been There girlie!? I've been stalking this story for months almost a year since your last update, but here it is! I hope to see an update soon, I absolutely love this story :D
amy (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Apr 2011
A STROKE OF GENIUS! SHE IS OUT ON HER BUTT, WITHOUT A LEG TO STAND ON! PUT HER IN A PICKLE, PERIOD.
Interesting story! I like this turn around on the normal sess/kag stories. Definitely interested to see where this is going! And as a person who has been cheated on, I'm really rooting for Kagome's revenge!
amy (Chapter 5) - Sat 26 Mar 2011
I LOVE YOUR PLOT TWIST, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, WITH MORE UPDATES!
pauly (Chapter 5) - Sat 26 Mar 2011
WOW!!!! Go Kags and kick his a**.
Emily (Chapter 4) - Wed 03 Nov 2010
I stopped reading fanfiction awhile ago. But I'm absolutely loving your story! Can't wait for you to update!!
sweetangel =))..!! (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 May 2010
heyy!! dis fanfiction rocks..!!
n i juss cnt w8 4 da nxt chapp sooo plzZZzzzZZZzz..will uh hurry n write..i juss cnt w8 4 da plan kagome formed..!!
n ur dis fanfiction rocks..!! =)) =D ..!!
luv it alottttttttttttttt..!! <3 <3
sweet angel (Chapter 4) - Tue 18 Aug 2009
i love ur story an wan u to write an complete it i love dis story so much dat i hav rad it 7 timez im w8in for u to update.........thanku
Dehlia (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Aug 2009
It's a really good story so far. The only thing that gets to me is that you're a little too direct with how your writing the story. You don't play around with your words to make it seem more interesting.
You're saying, "Billy had an interesting day and he couldn't wait till tomorrow," instead of "Billy's day had awaken thirst of intrigue that didn't seem capable of quenching."
Just have fun toying with your words to captivate your readers.
Best wishes,
Dehlia
awesome aewsome awesome i hope you update
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