I love this story! The anticipation of Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally meeting again is building up so nicely. It was a surprise that you used Sara; I was expecting Kagura for some reason. Keep up the great work! See you next time!
Well its good so far but, it would be nice to hear from Sesshomarus point of view now and then. But its your story so if you like it the way it is then thats cool. Anyways update soon!