Sad you didn't write more...

Okay, I really like the plunnie, I really do. I just can't finish reading it. Your grammar is great, so is your spelling but your writing is horrid. At least in this case. I'm not used to this one thing then the next, without any supporting factors. It just doesn't make sense to me at all. There is so much more that could be done, more description of the scenes, her thoughts and responses to what she see's and feels. The packs reactions to what seems to be strange. The scene which caught me was in the sping with Sango. There could have been so much more there. I tried, I might try again later, we'll see.

I love this story. How Kagome is all bad and only Sesshomaru can help her. WOW Please update soon.

I liked this one & I think since the whole Inu-Tachi know & they know Sessh is the only one who can completely save her from losing control of her beast & hurting her friends & if she did that she'd be suicidal...& now with Inuyasha aware of who/what she is ,his anger & jealousy along with Kikyo & Kouga trying to convince him Kagome needs to killed when Sessh isn't close.....especially since Sessh has now marked her I think now would be the best time for Sessh to travel with them (Kagome,Sango,Shippo,Miroku & Inuyasha).I think that with Inu reaction along with his anger at being kept in the dark,his jealousy & his hatred of his half bro...I think he'll do everything in his power to upset/anger Kagome into losing her control so he could have an excuse to kill her over his own anger & jealousy or because in this state he'll be even more willing to find reason to believe that killing Kagome is the best choice he can make in order to protect his pack,himself & bring Kikyo back to life...........which is completely ridiculous...since just because Kagome is the most powerful Miko since Midoriko & a witch used a curse to bring Kikyo from dead to undead using Kaome's soul...& if Kagome really was Kikyo's reincarnation it might have taken all of Kagome's soul & killed Kagome meaning Kikyo wouldn't have to steal innocent souls to feed off of, but the fact that Kagome was powerful enough to pull back almost all of her soul & live & remain extremely powerful with a bit of her soul missing tells me that ..Kagome is not Kikyo's reincarnation & even if Kikyo herself killed Kagome or convinced anyone to do it thinking that once Kagome was dead that Kagome's soul would go directly to Kikyo & bring her back to life is an idiots wish...

1st of all, if you believe in reincarnation than you know that souls move forward not backward. So if Kagome was killed, whether she's Kikyo's reincarnation or not, Kagome's soul would never return to a dead host ,it would move on to the next reincarnation.

2nd of all, we all know that Kikyo was only a priestess given the task to protect the Jewel, she failed in that task in may ways...1st she was willing to use the Jewel by making a selfish wish on it to transform Inu to a human,2nd was the fact that just being willing use the Jewel made her tainted for the mere reason that she was willing to use its power for herself which is why she was so easily fooled by Naraku & 3rd she was selfish enough to believe in her anger that by burning the jewel with her body she could keep it from others....which really meant she felt noone but her was worthy or deserving of the jewels power so she was making a last ditch effort to keep it for herself forever....  

The fact that Kagome's soul was deemed by the Kami's before she was born as a being of complete purity,a being who could never be corrupted......... had to be the reason she was born with the Jewel within her & the power to protect it....she didn't have to train or prove herself worthy to another living being before being entrusted with the protection of the Jewel.She was born a being who never desired power for herself.....her only desire in life was to have the ability to protect....& not just protect herself, her family & friends but anyone & everyone from pain or hurt. 

I am really looking forward to the next chapter & I really hope Sessh joins her & her group.....as I now worry that when she's human or asleep ..Inuyasha,Kikyo or Kouga will try to kill her with the excuse that she's a danger

Oh yay!  I am so glad to see you working on this story again!  Please update soon!  I love the idea - a new twist on things.

I want to see how Sesshoumaru convinces Kagome to become his mate.  Something's gonna have to give - like 'Yasha.  

very interesting...LOVE that Sesshomaru has a healthy amount of fear of Kagome and that Kagome's stronger than him *heehee*

anyway I hope you'll update soon!

when will you update?

wow! i read all the previous chapters & i think the story's gonna turn out awesome! keep up the good work! plz update soon!

its a great story i dont know why other dont leave a review but keep up the great work ^_^

updata soon

This is seriously one of the most original ideas for turning Kagome into a youkai. Love it!!