Wow... the citrus actually caught me off guard... I totally loved the kiss and the spilling of beans, but when it started getting lemony I was shocked. Not that it wasn't well written or anything: on the contrary, it was very well written. Now I'm curious to see how this event shapes the events to come.
OMG!!!
It's almost 1 AM and I should be asleep but just couldn't pass up a chance to read this. And oh what a read. Sesshomaru doing a 69!!! WTH!! That was the sexiest thing I have ever read. And so descriptive. Man, you leave a girl wanting. ....I'm gonna have to read this again tomorrow.
Wow. I don't know what else to say. *fans self*
FINALLY!!!!! *does a happy dance* That chapter was wonderful! I especially liked the argument they had. Now....when you had Sesshoumaru bite her shoulder...was he marking her as his mate? I can't wait for the next one!
::cricket:cricket:: ....... ........... Wow. That was AMAZING!!!
*pant pant pant* OMG that was wonderful, i haven't read a lemon that good in forever......and u fit it so well into the story, i luv luv luv it!!! If this was ur first attempt i can't wait to see what you come up with when you are more seasoned!! Much Luv my dear, ur writing, as always, is full of awsomeness. I can't wait to see what u come up with next!!
absolutely wonderful, lady b! delicious and nutritious! Well, maybe not nutritious, but most definitely delicious!
Okay, I almost died reading this chapter!!! I was so scared as I was coming to the end, because there didn't seem to be enough chapter left!! I LOVED this update!! And not just the hot and heavy stuff! I really liked the argument that lead up to it! Great job, as usual! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Fabulous chapter! *melts into a puddle of fangirl goo*
I didn't think I'd be crying for the warlord by the end of this chapter. Amazing twist. I'm looking forward to the 'meeting of minds' between Kags and Sess over her need to achieve and his need to protect. You do a wonderful job of using dialogue.
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
I really liked this chapter because I wasn't sure what was to come once she got past the doors.
I love your style of writing and always get excited when a new chapter is posted!
Man, I feel sorry for the "ogre" warlord. Good thing Sesshomaru was there to save Kagome... again. lol Very nice and I am eager for more. :D
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