It was a wonderful story from start to finish. I liked how in the end Kagome taught him a lesson about love. It was worth staying up late for on a school night, though I awoke late ~^_^~ Anyways, I can't wait to read more stories by you in the future.
| Looking past the few 'quick typing' spelling errors (teh instead of the...lol we all do it..) I am pleased to say I've come across your story. I haven't read a good well thought out story in a while. It's a romantic story full of lemony goodness that I miss, with such detail and exquisite scenery...(shirtless..) I must aplaude your work and humbly beg for more! :D Keep up the good work, and I am glad to hear you will be continuing despite having bad to worse weeks and days.
Your fan,
Inumaru_Rapture
Diane (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Sep 2009
| I really enjoyed it & am sorry to see it end.
REDWOLF (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
| Fantastic chapter!!
| Not disappointed, at all! (yes, I'm jumping back and forth between two different fanfiction sites, lol) Loved it! Bravo!
autumngold (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
| This is the first story that I've read where the third child, not the first, and a girl ends up the heir to Sesshoumaru's title. Nice twist. I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are getting along now. Thank you for the update!
REDWOLF (Chapter 9) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
| "hurt filled sapphires", had Kagome got free of the room and heard? Well, it's time for some serious MIKO KAGOME POWER, because these arrognant youkai need to know who they are messing with...haha...a pissed, hurt Kagome is never a good combination (LOL)! Great story, I read all the chapters today and I am a new fan!!!!
stars (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
| please updata
Diane (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
| I like it but the newest chapter has some rather odd word choice errors, like here; "If I delete Milord would hear me out, delete makes no sense at all.
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
| Poor Kagome, I wish she hadn't had to hear that! Especially while she's pregnant. It's sad that she and her pups will have to face so much hate even in these modern times. I just wish that Sesshoumaru wouldn't get mad at Kagome for listening in on his private conversation. I won't beg for an update, because I know you are so busy! Have fun in school!
| *dies angsty death* n0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o!!! awe fixit!
| Wow, so much emotion in this chapter. I really hope that the emotional relationship develops more, since from the beginning, it's been purely physical. Our favorite couple have a lot to learn about each other, and I see a rocky road ahead.
I look forward to the next update.
stars (Chapter 8) - Sun 23 Aug 2009
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| mmm, lemony goodness is addicting... wonderful job, that was amazing! Impeccible detail, wonderful plot... the only thing that distracted me was lack of commas in certain areas, and if I am only complaining about punctuation, you know it was a fabulous piece of work. Look forward to reading more!
| RAWR! Great chapter. I'm so enjoying this story. Can't wait to see more.
LOL yeah, I'm bouncing back and forth between here and ff.n lol
stars (Chapter 7) - Sun 09 Aug 2009
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