Awww this was a great chapter! There finally getting somewhere but right at the beginning of all the troubles. Awesome job! So can't wait to read what happens next! Update soon and good luck with everything in your classes! :)

I'm not the reviewer kind of reader (I'm ashamed of it, should you mind) but that Poe rhime at the end of chapter 13th just made me do it.

You rock, I got to your fic today and have already read all the 13 chaps.. Congrats!!!!

Thank you for the lovely Single's Awareness Day and Zombie Jesus Day presents :) As for the dragons metaphor I suggest "When life gives you dragons, saddle them and create your own personal army of dragon riders" meh, it's the best I could come up with lol

First off I feel I have to say.... Oh My Gawd! This was... wow... I'm speechless this was so great. I was pulled in the moment I started reading this, so much in fact that I read the whole thing without stopping. You my dear have an amazing talent, you are very gifted in pulling people in with your words and I can only hope that you never ever stop writing! This is a truly wonderful story, it's made me laugh, cry, and feel every other emotion I possess.

I think the part that got me the most is where he first laid sight on her wounded back, those few paragraphs tugged at my heart strings in a way that few stories have managed to do.

My hat is off to you lady! Thank you so much for such an amazing work of fiction and know that I eagerly await your next update! :)

~Quiet Whisper

I have to say that this story just gets better and better as i read it. I love the way that Sessy and Kagome and figuring out how they feel about each other. Slowly but surely and that just makes it even better. I bet Inu is gonna have a HUGH fit once he finds out that Kagome is with Sessy and watch Kagome come right to Sesshomaru's rescue. I think that will be a very amusing chapter to say the least. I will be anxiously watching for another chapter.

great job as usual!

Loved the chapter as much as I loved the fic. Some of it was just classic! When I got the email notice, I nearly jumped up with excitement to squeal like a fan-girl, though I was at work thus had to wait all day to read it...I was sad. I'm happy now! Just an fyi, Frère Jacques English version (for those who'd like to know) is:

Are you sleeping? Are you sleeping?
Brother John, Brother John,
Morning bells are ringing, Morning bells are ringing.
Ding, dang, dong, Ding, dang, dong.

I love your Nuntucket poem. I even had a tune. XD

ROFL!  That last line was hilarious!  The fight scene was so detailed and totally awesome.  I could picture it in my head.  I loved the way that Kagome dove into the fight.  Thanks for the rhyme at the bottom.  It was funny as well.  Despite the serious circumstances, you managed to insert humor throughout.  I really enjoyed that.  Thanks!  Excellent chapter!

It was awesome!! Just kind got that ball rolling and then boom, it's over. I can't wait to see what happens now.

LOL....HAHAHAHAHA....I just love Sesshoumaru's response to hearing the "language of love".   I have missed this story.  I'm sooooo happy you updated. Please update again soon.

XD  I love the bucket.

OH MY GOD!!!

I am going to truthfully say that this fanfiction is on par with Tales from the House of the Moon. Kagome and Sesshoumaru are so in character, and the romance is natural, so this is like a breath of fresh air.

Update soon!!! 

XD Creepy indeed. Thanks for the post. GAH!  I've been reading so much Sessh/Kago fics that I'm beginning to forget which is which.

Just left off right in the middle of battle. OH, the suspense!!! Can barely wait for the next update.

I don't know where you live

so here's my review

you should write a new chapter

or possibly two

Just once again like to say how much I lurve your story, as well as adding the fact you are perhaps my favouritest author I've read to date. Your stories are absolutely a joy to read and really, really funny. Au revoir!

Tara-Yomitorilka

i cant even begin to express how great this story is keep up the great work ^_^

That was amazing. "Innocent and intimate. Like her" was probably one of the best lines I've read in the longest time. Very simple and yet amazing. And, of course, I do love the rhymes at the end of chapters. So cool.

I believe Sesshoumaru would do anything for Rin, especially after seeing that episode with his mom, where he traveled to the netherworlds in an effort to save her life, that episode was so touching. It's my fave by far. Anyway I'm like your story so far. :)

OMG! A kiss! Finally!

Sesshoumaru really needs to figure out his love! He has gotten a first taste of the green-eyed monster aka jelousy, sadness, happiness and lust in a day! And they say that women are difficult! THIS is what I call moodswings!!! I understand that all this is kinda new to Sesshoumaru. I mean I bet that he must of have experienced lust, happiness and sadness. But it probably didn't come easily! And Kags managed only with her words! Man, he's got it bad! And the jelousy? Well he was jelous of Inuyasha having Tessaiga, right? But jelousy over a subject and a person's feelings is an entirely different thing! I remember when I was in elementary and one girl told me that she likes THAT boy! The only thing coming through my head at the moment was; BRING IT BITCH! Of course the guy noticed neither of us! I think it's because the whole boys-don't-mature-as-fast-as-girls thing! I bet he wasn't prepared to get a girl, even thought he made a great impression that humping a pillow in the middle of a lesson must be THE greatest thing ever! So I wondered how is it with Sesshoumaru and his ageing? I know that he is like totally ancient, but isn't there a possibility that compared to other demons he is still fairly young? Or it just might be the I'm-holier-than-thou attitude!

And poor Kags thinking about her expire date! It's like she already doomed herself cuz even if she would survire it was supposed to be her date to be eaten/killed so then she would just die after few days some another way! But we all know that ain't gonna happen, right? Cuz I seriously hope so!

BTW about the arse, I live in England these past 3 years and never heard anyone actually use it on public. But I bet that some upperclass snobbish dick head might. Cuz it is kinda posh, you know. But I DO call parking lots a car park, laugh at me all you want! And the thing about swans...I heard that some lil girl has got bitten by one and so she send a complain letter to Queen. And she recieved an apology letter! Pretty fucked up! I would at least milk the queen off some money! Like really! Getting an injury only because 'someone' cannot keep their pet on leash! Yeah I know I'm such a bitch! But really Queen has a money for practicaly nothing! I have to pay a fucking royal road tax only to be allowed to drive the street and park in front of my own house, in my CAR PARK (yeah haha really funny)!!! And the money goes to who?! The Queen! As if having the pay the stupid highway fee isn't enough!!!! GAAAAAAAAAW!

SERIOUSLY U DON'T NEED TO READ THIS SHIT!!! THE ONLY IMPORTANT THING IS THAT I LOVED THE CHAPTER!