I feel your chapters are well written and interesting to read. I like your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. I feel it accurate. The plot is steady but not sluggish. My only complaint is that you write more. =)

i have to admit, i so love this whole series, its just so sweet, and im still laughing about a couple of the comments. I lvoe your charachters because you write them in such a way that i feel attached to them.  SOmetimes this fic makes me laugh, sigh, smile and breaks my heart. But all in all it is very well done. Wonderful job!

how sad, as always your imagery was beautiful. I could tell where they were as i read the realization thrown off by the softness od snow. Wonderful job!

So very sweet, its such a beautiful picture you set for us all. I lvoe it!

awww, this was so sweet and I think you ended it perfectly. I am a big fan of the multitude of single moments lol (note three fics written in that fashion myself) so I absolutely adore this piece.

Oh My GOsh... this chapter was amazing, the interaction between them...i have read so much fanfiction but the way you write it is so beautiful to me, im smiling and wondering and hoping and nervous. To cause so much emotion from a reader with so little words is quite a talent you have. I could picture them in the rain running. The bad day, the need for coffee... wonderful. Ok i am rambling. I realized i reviewed these out of order, but i figured i hadnt missed a chapter yet so i better go back. As always great job.

This chapter was too cute, i love their interaction, and i love the idea of him playing with a cute puppy, and her running around his feet that was priceless. Your imagery is beautifully done leaving me warm and fuzzy and smiling. I love it!

Awww dogs. I love this little series. They're just so peaceful. And I think you need to draw me a picture of Sesshoumaru wearing glasses *drools*

Hey,

This is brilliant! I'm looking forward to more. I love your progression between them, and I love drabble series lol.

Awesome work!

i love when he teaches her, the little realtionship your building is sweet but sad i have so many questions but im not sure i want the answers. Well done!

Wow that one was intense. You do really well with so few words.

"Sesshoumaru raised an eyebrow. "My being youkai is the reason you do not eat?""

LMAO too funny, this little chapter of banter was adorable and almost lightening. I really like where your going with this.

What an iteresting idea and how sad. What does he need forgivness for? I need answers!! Great job!