Hey, so I'm not done with this yet, but I wanted to show you a little name snafu so you can fix it at your leisure;

""Forward as ever Sesshoumaru, very well then. I'm leaving Japan for Italy in a few months. I want to set up a parlor there, or perhaps a boutique. I'm not sure, I'll figure that out when I get there. I'm bored with my business here and it's time for me to move on." Azumi never let her gaze drop from Sesshoumaru's. She had made her decision in this matter, and while she knew Sesshoumaru did not love her as she did not love him, he would miss her presence in his life. Just as she would miss his company. They had become good friends over the years as an understanding formed between them, but she felt stifled here. The world was changing and it was time for her to change with it."

The bolded/underlined shows where it should be Naomi's name, not Azumi.

Anywho, reading on!

-Paperwing

Are you going to be finishing the story? I wanna see how this story turns out so bad.  Please finish it :)

:pathetic pout: how long until she wakes up!? not even 10 years have passed yet and it is already the 21 chapter!!!

awwww that was sooo cute! I hope that when Rin is re-born she will be born as a child of Kagome and Sesshomaru and that they will recognise her for who she is...

isn't it kind of unfair that all of kagome's alies and enemies get to spend 500 years gaining strength and surpassing her while she is stuck lying there doing nothing?

"He displayed none of her own superior traits and it angered her."  does she really think her traits are supierior to Sesshomaru's?

Love it! Please Update Soooooooooooooooooooooooooon!

*Dramatic Yell* Noooooooooooo! WWWHHHYYY! Why did you have to be so cruel and leave it there!? I'm begging you! Update Soooooon!

Please uupdate this story is so very amazing and it is so very well planned that hate to to see it be forgotten. So please add more to this story so that your fans could be satisfied with this story of yours

I'm so mad at you. Because you didn't continue the story on fanfiction, I was going crazy. I was so in love with it. And then I find it here, and spend a few days reading it, taking in all the aqesomeness in it. And now I have one thing to say to you: please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens and it's too good. You're a great writer

Oh I adore this story. (I've been skipping out on homework to read it). When is the next chapter going to be up?

I really enjoy reading this story. I am sorry about you losing so many chapters. Writing long chapters is not easy. I am hoping that this story will have its happy ending that we are all hoping for. It is such a good plot, and you are a very talented writer. It is very hard finding really great stories that have long chapters as yours does. I do hope you update soon, it would be a shame if this wondeful story goes unfinished.

Are you going to finish the Choices and Consequences Stoty?

Hi,

I find this story very nice and wow, does it have a lot of twists and turns. I love that. I just hope that Azumi will get her justice... By the way, Taro,is a great original character. I had some good times when he was lecturing his father, well, in a hidden manner. 

I noticed your note about the ?. It has indeed an accent over it. It is indeed written like that in Japanese And in many words. But if I remember correctly, they do use ou in hiragana. All the forms you mentioned are ok I guess. Thank you for all the information you put up there. It was very interesting to read it.

bye Angel

Hi Texan lady, I have been reading your fic's (sessh&Kag) and I really have to say that I love them all, I am waitin for you to upload ( sorry foy my english) a new chapter of them, tehy really catch me for sure, and I really whant to know how they will finish, I have ben reading Choices and Consequences and The breeder so please I beg you to finish them I have that cain of imagination to finish them in my mind but is't never the same ^_^ I hope you dont be mad for this.... owariii

please update soon!

this story is so goooooood!

I just found this story and the breeder and absolutely love them both! Though I did enjoy this one more since it is not as dark. This has been such a great story so far that I hope you post a new chapter for it sometime soon!

Texan lady, How can I ever put my gratitude into this review without writing a book myself. I came across it by chance two weeks ago and found myself sucked in. I am the pickiest of readers. I simply cannot just read any story. After a while I've become a fanfict snob. It can't just be a mindless pwp. I've followed this site too long. I've been a reader since '04 when it was a single spark. You're story was the read I turned to on breaks from work and school. I read  your story nonstop. Savioring each chapter because I saw how long it'd had been since you've updated. I've fallen in love with the kamis miko and her guardian. I've fallen for the shadow warriors and everything they represent. You're story is woven so well I couldn't believe what you had given into it. What novel you are writing outside of the genre must be spectacular. 

I know you're working on the breeder, but this story has my heart. Please don't forget this beautiful creation. I'd buy it if you'd published it. 

Regardless of outcomes, thank you for all you've put into it. I myself have had my work lost many times and threw my hands up to the cause, but you're in too deep. People simply adore it and you. 

DTH

I know that you have been focusing most of your time with updating The Breeder. Which I don't mind at all by the way, but I love this story so much and I would love it if you could work on it after you have completed The Breeder. I would be ecstatic. I love your stories!

I wanted to take the time to say this now... I don't know why, but I feel I must.

I'm really enjoying this story.  It has fascinated me completely and I can't do anything else until I've caught up except what is neccessary.  It's been a long time since a fic enraptured me this way so I thank you.

I love this story! Excellent plot and fantastic twists! Please keep going with this story.