Some of the best stories i have ever read have been written by you Oroyukae, like 'Brutal Fate', 'Wrong Number', 'Broken Promises' just to name a few. However i get soooo caught up in your stories that waiting for the update almost drives me insane!LoL(Even though most of the time you update everday!LoL) So this time around i decided to wait till you completed it, and let me just say, once again i am so amazed by your talents for good literature!! I loved this story as i have your other ones and i can't wait to see what you come up with next!!!!
I am sad to have it come to an end, but what a sweet and happy ending. For once I don't feel like you have anything sneaky up your sleeve for our heroes...
What a fascinating chapter. It was a frank and detailed account of what it is like to give birth. Amazing!!! Great writing, as always!
Hannah (Chapter 41) - Wed 01 Jul 2009
END???
END???!!!!!
I think I'll do what Masaru is doing and have a tantrum!
This has been such a joy to read, I don't want to think about it ending! Any hope for some oneshots at least? Something to ive me reason to continue living? hahahah
THanks so much for writing and using your time and sharing this with the world. I truly appreciate it, and am grateful for the hours of relaxation, amusement, entertainment, and fangirl squeeling youve given me!
THANKYOU!!
~ Hannah
This was a wonderful story... I admit that I have not reviewed, but I have been waiting rather impatiently for each and every chapter. You are such a talented writer. I can't wait to see your next venture.
miwa03 (Chapter 41) - Wed 01 Jul 2009
Congratulation Orayukae!! I'm glad that there is finally a happy ending for Sess and Kags!
Can you hear me clapping and praising you yet again my Lady O??? I loved it all! I didn't know babies swell up when they give you the epideral. I don't recall PJ ever looking swollen. She was just so tiny. I thought it was funny how concerned Kagome was that he didn't cry when everyone else, doctor included told her he was fine. He just needed a good reason to cry and wanting food is a VERY good reason. And Sessh had to check to make sure his "equipment" didn't shrink...oh how just like a man! I can just see Ai looking quite satisfied with herself now that everything has worked out to meet her approval. I'll be anxiously waiting for your next masterpiece. You gotta know I can't be totally happy unless you are regaling us with your wonderous stories of love, drama and intrigue! Love ya! JEN
*Applause* Magnificent! Stunning, beautiful, awe-inspiring! I loved every line.
You my dear are a true artist with your work. My hat goes off to you.
Encore? Epilogue?? No matter, It was wonderful while it lasted anyways.
~Tiana+Love<3
leonzite (Chapter 41) - Wed 01 Jul 2009
what about the nanny's interview!!!???? Wonderful ending, enjoyed both stories from start to finish! Keep up the good work!!! *wink wink*
awe that is so adorable, cheek spliting grin here Oroyukae you write awesome stories they are so great. is this the last one or will there be another?
keichi` (Chapter 41) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
this is the most wonderful sesh and kag story i ever read. could you please make a sequel. you don't have to do it now but int he future could you please make one. and put sequel to this story for the title. thats if your gonna make a sequel. it ended to soon to me T__T www.wheeler2381 @ bellsouth.net
Dani (Chapter 41) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
Oh, please, noooo! Is this really the end? Will there be a sequal, I really want to know what happens to Ai and all that jazz. Well, this has been a great story to follow and I am sad to see it come to an end. Great job and happy trails!
Hannah (Chapter 40) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
AWWW THANKYOU SO MUCH for these lovely 2 chapters!!!
*feels all warm and fuzzy*
the scene at the end with Sesshou bonding was so beautiful!! I really hope I can read that from his perspective!!! Aww thanks for this great fic! I've got a huge silly grin on my face, hahaha.
=D
Anonymous (Chapter 39) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
AWE COME ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NO FAIR :GROUPBLE UNDER BREATH:
UPDATE
katlady (Chapter 38) - Mon 29 Jun 2009
:lol:: a few years back my sister was going through her second pregnancy and I had to rush her to the hospital cause she thought she was in labor.I sat in that chair reading a book as each "contraction" hit her and listened to women on the maternity ward screamed out those same things to their husbands or boyfriends. Found out at 8 months she was passing a kidney stone and they could give her nothing for the pain so she had to lay there and go through each pain and I sat there and red. She yelled at me saying I was useless to some one in her condition and I should go home. I looked at her and asked her if she planed on walking or hitch hiking back that kinda shut her up and I went back to reading my book. It was Harry Potter one I for get witch year but we were there till she finally managed to pass the stone witch seamed like 7 gallons of water latter but it was 12 hours
Geez, after having such a successful first family dinner party and (though it was too exhausing great sex, to go into a full blown labor!!! Those poor kids! The thought that Kagome might have peed all over him and the bed was funny...but my heart really goes out to Sesshoumaru because of all the verbal abuse he had to endure AND the thought that the baby is too big and she is suffering in labor and that it may be lifethreatening... I can just imagine how he's feeling right now. I am sooo glad his father was able to get him to see that she is just going through a twisted hormonal labor reaction that alot of women go through or his leaving her alone like she said would have hurt them both after the pup is born. I wonder if he's going to have her or himself "fixed" after all she's put him AND everyone else through? I sure would have second thoughts about going through that "hell" again. How long did they all endure the pregnancy from hell?(I'm including Kagome too, ya know. she had to live it). You did an excellent job writing these scenes...I do hope they weren't from personal experience...if so, my heart feels for you...I'm wondering something else but I think I'll wait to see if my question is answered later. See ya tomorrow night! JEN
Hannah (Chapter 38) - Mon 29 Jun 2009
Ooh you are so cruel to leave it on such a cliffhanger! And trust Sesshou to send her into labour the way he did, hahahah.
I'm dreading and eagerly awaiting the birthing though, and how Sesshou will have to control his beast if Kegs has her C-section.
Anyways, update asap pleaseee!!
=D
funny ^_^ this is such a great story
YESSSSS FINALLY!!!!! WHOOP!!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter!
You know, it's not fair that there are people out that have such thoughts about heavily pregnant women but to voice their opinions out loud it truly incomprehensible. Pregnancy is beautiful no matter the size of the belly and we have such attractive clothing these days and I am sure Sesshoumaru would never let his woman be dressed in anything less than beautifully fitting. I am also saddened by way alot of pregnant women cry over being fat and unattractive. It's one of God's greatest gifts to be able to bring a life into this world and by the grace of God I was barely able to carry my girl to 34 weeks only to find out that I would never be able to safely carry anymore children or risk my life and/or theirs. So I encourage women to see themselves as blessed. I'm so glad that InuPapa wants to learn how to be a loving and nurturing Grandsire. AFTER Kagome has the pup I'm sure she'll have no problem showing him the finer gifts of family love. She's quite the charmer when she isn't pregnant. Hey, my daughter and husband thinks she needs extra vitamins to help her depressive times. (I explained she's going through a very hormonal pregnancy cause they started reading this review) Maybe SHE needs the rare steak to help balance some of them hormones...Anyway...I best be going now because my family thinks I write way too long reviews. Until next time, JEN
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